Large Print • Handheld • Audio • Rating
using
paypal 		Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

School Starts

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
• Add Review
Review of chapter "Magneto Vs. The X-Team" from musiclover
Review:
kinda hard to read for me but kinda sounds funny especially that cheap perfume bit
Review By [musiclover] • Date [9 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Magneto Vs. The X-Team" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Are you sure this story is in the right category, as it seems to be a non-crossover?

Additional as a rule here you have to write a crossover before you can write a non-crossover.

Then I would say, it may be good if you change the format of the story. Speech in extra lines, not too big paragraphs. The readability would be better. And try to use a spell-checker, especially on the names (Magento-Magneto).
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [22 Apr 05] • Not Rated
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Published Authors [3084/18624] • Crossover Stories [18202/22310] • Answered Challenges [868/5139] • Complete FFAs [2849/4246]
Site code originally based on Storyline ©IO Designs 2002. All stories posted remain the property of their respective authors; permission from the author is required to publish them elsewhere. Any trade marks that appear on the site are used without permission and remain the property of their respective owners. All donations are used to provide the service; no profits are made by the site owners, developers, or authors from publishing works on this site.