Review of chapter "Magneto Vs. The X-Team" from musiclover
kinda hard to read for me but kinda sounds funny especially that cheap perfume bit
Review By [musiclover
] • Date [9 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Magneto Vs. The X-Team" from NoLifeKing
Are you sure this story is in the right category, as it seems to be a non-crossover?
Additional as a rule here you have to write a crossover before you can write a non-crossover.
Then I would say, it may be good if you change the format of the story. Speech in extra lines, not too big paragraphs. The readability would be better. And try to use a spell-checker, especially on the names (Magento-Magneto).
Review By [NoLifeKing
] • Date [22 Apr 05] • Not Rated