Review of chapter "Five" from Vickzie
Review By [Vickzie
] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five" from Xeelia
Is there any chance that there will be more to this story?? I so want to find out if the cousins ever meet, if Buffy is resurrected in this universe, and so much more!! This story is great! :D
Review By [Xeelia
] • Date [28 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from TammyJet
Gotta say, I love this story. Nathaniel is so perfectly in character, he makes me almost sad. 'Course, I like every story of yours that I've ever read, and frequently come on TTH just to re-read one...
Review By [TammyJet
] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five" from NeedlessNoodles
I wish you would've written more on this. It's great so far and I'd love to see how things would have turned out.
Review By [NeedlessNoodles
] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from valdimarian
ya know, this wouldn't be a bad place to end it, or at least call it an end now and start up a new story at a later point where we catch up to the two cousins later.
Hmm, ya know I don't think I've seen an Anita Blake crossover story where the reason vampires are legal everywhere else, but not Sunydale has a directly hellmouthy reason. Usually it's either skimmed over or that there are two types of vampires, but never one where the hellmouth actively taints vampires turning them into your wholly soulless monsters, instead of just morally ambiguous versions of themselves.
Review By [valdimarian
] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five" from zeppelinrules
This is an amazing story, like all of your stories i should add, but u only get an 8 because you havn't finished, but otherwise 10 all the way. I know you're probably not going to be finishing this because its been what 3 years or so, no matter how awesome you would be if you did pick it up again. Anywho love it and keep up the excellent work on your other fics
Review By [zeppelinrules
] • Date [14 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from Astaraele
Awww, I adore this story. Are you ever planning on finishing it?
Review By [Astaraele
] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five" from RAINXIA
hey plz finish this love it
Review By [RAINXIA
] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from jennzabelle
I read Letter Box and Obituary in one swoop, so this is for both.
I liked these companion stories alot. It was interesting to see Joyce's strength and integrity from Nathaniel's POV and to know that she was flawed enough not to check on her nephews or insist that her husband let her take them in. I understand why Nathaniel was so angry with Joyce at first and I really loved her reaction to him. I also liked the way you had Dawn absent in Obituary and had her laced throughout Letter Box, even if Anita and Nathaniel knew there was s/thing funky going on with her.
Putting the second half of the story in the hands of Nathaniel and Dawn was a marvelous idea. They're both so vulnerable and broken and angry under the surface, but they have the strength and energy to reach out to each other and make contact. Dawn's persistent whine that no one treats her like a grown up is perfect coupled with her very un-adult behavior. Teenagerhood is hell on everyone around, not just the kid in question. Spike's ban on internet porn for the next 30 years was cute and very genuine. Nathaniel is kind of in the same state, although he's older and much more experienced than Dawn - he's not quite independent enough to be a grown up, but he's not helpless enough to be a true child, either. His self-esteem issues and Dawn's were a nice parallel.
I enjoyed this very much, and I wouldn't mind another installment, but it also works just left as it is. Good job!
Review By [jennzabelle
] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from Aomizuoko
ohhh! Write more! Please, its awesome work!
Review By [Aomizuoko
] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from draconin
Oh, you have GOT to write more on this one! Please?
Review By [draconin
] • Date [4 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from AllenPitt
Now all that is needed is for Jean Claude to hear about this, and hear or read the name "Spike" .... heh.... can't you just picture Anita & company rushing to Sunnydale to 'save' Dawn? any lycanthrope would immediately sense/smell that the Buffybot wasn't a person. And hm, zombie raising/resurrections.... Anita is the expert at that sort of thing, and would think it was a real real bad idea.... or if too late on that might be the right person to talk to about post-death- traumatic stress.....
Review By [AllenPitt
] • Date [24 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five" from softly
OH, I love this!!
It's pity you haven't updated in a while. I love the plot, and writing, and, oh, just about everything!
Review By [softly
] • Date [29 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from Katza
OK I may have already reviewed this chapter but I love this story of yours, it's probably my favourite story that you've written the only thing I dislike is that it hasn't been updated in over a year... I know you write a lot of wonderful stories and probably have others that you like better but maybe you could revisit this story sometime soon? Please?
Review By [Katza
] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from whoadreambig
And you just made my day! ;)
Review By [whoadreambig
] • Date [21 Dec 06] • Not Rated