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Review of chapter "Part 5" from (Past Donor)sabriel
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i loved the story, the wish and the new universe. The fact that dawn now has powers and buffy doesn't is great. its what she has always wanted.
When are you going to do the next story? Can't wait to read it.
Review By [(Past Donor)sabriel] • Date [26 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 5" from Teldra
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Wonderful story! Looking forward to the next part.
Review By [Teldra] • Date [5 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 5" from (Past Donor)Laney
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I can't believe I forgot to review this final part! Bad, Laney. So here I am reviewing...

I have to say the ending was absolutely perfect. Dawn's decision not to change back was incredibly realistic. In too many stories do we see people doing selfless things but, in this case, if Dawn had changed things back I'm not sure I'd believe it. We've seen in the show how deeply Joyce's death impacted her. I can't see Dawn giving up the opportunity to see her mum alive, happy... to see Buffy living the life she wished for (no pun intended).

So a brilliant story. I can't wait for more of this series.
Review By [(Past Donor)Laney] • Date [4 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 5" from Emmy
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Houses,

I just got around to reading this, and I'm very sorry it took me so long. Yesterday's Sunrise is incredible. I love it.

Excellent job!

Smiles, Emmy
Review By [Emmy] • Date [22 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 5" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
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I can't recall if I already gave you feedback or not. Sice the story is complete I figred I'm mention again how much I enjoyed the unusual nature of this tale. Usually the universes collide through coincidence or accidence, but to have Dawn wish a complete transformation of the world and eliminate some of the key characters is brilliant. And, while some might think it horrible that Dawn chooses to keep the new verse as it is - it is fitting for her teenage self. She is a selfish teenager at this point in the btvs epic and still a bit by the end. She might love Willow, but it is natural for her to chose her mother over Willow and it is a brilliant twist of events. The "talking to dead people" is a surprise and I wonder what you'll do with it in the sequels. Finally, my curiosity is piqued regarding the next tale... I'm wondering if Willow could be considered a "dead" person since she wasn't born but did exist in the other reality? Do the "Sunnydale Trio" exist and will they play a suprise visit to the storyline? Is Riley an Iniative Soldier -- after all, why is Ohio boy in Sunnyhell? Oz? Does Spike have a chip or did he never come to CA? Faith? And then there is the Anitaverse as well! Looking forward to it all.
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [6 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 5" from (Past Donor)Vesica
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It was the Dark Ages, Dawn. There weren’t a lot of growth opportunities for women back then - Best Rationale for Becoming a Vengance Demon EVER. And a lovely side note on the plight of women throughout history.

Since the ending has become an epic issue - I have to throw in my two cents. I think it makes perfect sense. Sure some things are better and some things are worse. That sort of wash was bound to happen. But this new world offers Dawn some interesting opportunities. And - selfish reasons aside - that was a pretty high price for a return to the way things were.

Nicely done and a captivating, if uncanny, new universe! Looking forward to the sequels. ~Ves
Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [4 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 4" from (Past Donor)Vesica
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The bit about the pickles is just brilliant. Nice detail and a nice little extra shine to the world you're building. I love the crack about Buffy and Riley being a joke by Halfrek. I second that one. But - then again, in THIS universe, Buffy and Riley make a good pair. Hurl-inducing cute. Ew. Also, now I am wondering - how would one become qualified to juggle trout? Do you think there's a skills test and that's it or an entire course involving physics and Ichthyology and the areodynamics of various species?? ~Ves
Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [4 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3" from (Past Donor)Vesica
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Part of me is still grossing out about the peanut butter and banana quesidillas. Ew. Hooray for Anya!! It makes a nice change to have Dawn be able to talk to someone about this. Changes the tone of the fic some. Also, I can't help but be amused that the thing Anya is most upset about is no sex with Xander. Her mind works in such transparent ways. ~Ves
Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [4 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2" from (Past Donor)Vesica
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I am perversly pleased to have shallow, pointless Buffy back. But we can deal with my issues later. Joyce!! I think I would love this fic for having Joyce alone. *hugs Joyce* This has totally sucked me in. I am now dying for Dawn to go running around Sunnydale just to see what's different. ~Ves
Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [4 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Sunrise" from (Past Donor)Vesica
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Nice Dawn voice. Buffy is SO going to kill her. Well, maybe. So far - I like this universe. Interesting. :) ~Ves
Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [4 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 5" from (Past Donor)darkynangelic
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As promised, I was off to read... It just took me a little longer to finish. I liked this fic. Getting used to the Anita Blake details threw me off a teensy bit, but less than I thought. Very convincing, very solid work.

Screw the negative reviewer. He doesn't know his head from a hole in the ground.
Review By [(Past Donor)darkynangelic] • Date [4 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 5" from Wendy
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This is excellent, believeable and a lot of fun, especially with Anya! Dawn's choice makes perfect sense and I thought it was a marvellous reflection on her character. Yay!
Review By [Wendy] • Date [3 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 5" from CinnamonGrrl
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I really enjoyed this! Looking forward to the next bits :)
Review By [CinnamonGrrl] • Date [3 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 5" from websandwhiskers
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I liked the ending - very real, very human. I like that she chose not the conventional "right thing", but the thing she could live with, because there was good and bad to either choice. Also, your Anya voice is just absolutely perfect - the bluntless and the randomness and the pain sorta leaking through for all that she tries to act like everything's out there on the surface. I'm looking forward to the sequels.

-Sonya
Review By [websandwhiskers] • Date [3 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from CinnamonGrrl
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You've done a marvelous job with Anya here, and developing the fallout from the wish. Super job, my darling!
Review By [CinnamonGrrl] • Date [3 May 05] • Not Rated
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