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Review of chapter "Say What Now?" from Calypso
Review:
Well, it is more than eight years since this has been updated, but it still deserves a review. :)

I loved reading the few chapters here. I thought that the idea of Valhalla is interesting and I also appreciate the history you've given about Arda. I'm much too lazy to read the dry books, but I enjoyed the synopsis.

Overall I think the balance is good. I like that Galadriel respected her privacy and it wasn't displayed for the others that came with her. Since it really has nothing to do with them. I also enjoyed the trouble brewing and the request for help for Glorfindel. I confess I'm curious to read more, and since you mentioned this story having all the aspects that I'd like to read... Well, I'd read all of the story without complaint and enjoy every moment of it. Even if you don't have a beta, I enjoy the plot and thought that went into it so far.

If you are still alive and kicking, I sincerely hope you find inspiration for this again. Thanks for sharing this, it is a story I'd love to read to compltetion. Take care and enjoy the New Year!
Review By [Calypso] • Date [31 Dec 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Say What Now?" from LadyHecate
Review:
I loved this story. Well as much as is up. I just had one question, what did Kendra do to get into Valhalla? I mean she was pretty much just there to die. Oh, I meant 2 questions. The second was - will you ever come back to this do you think?
Review By [LadyHecate] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Say What Now?" from AtotheM
Review:
Great start. I hope some day you come back to Lady Buff-ii (brilliant).
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Say What Now?" from bradsan
Review:
This is so unfair another unfinished story.
Please update
Review By [bradsan] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Say What Now?" from macalaarmstrong
Review:
Hello,
I love this story so much and I hope you decide to continue it one day soon. I love how you have written the characters. I think you catch Buffy's sadness so hauntingly beautiful. You describe things so vividly and Buffy's reaction so marvelously that I can see it through Buffy's eyes. It doesn't seem like you need a beta, but I listen to the stories through a program because I am legally blind and can't see very well and it doesn't catch things like punctuations. I hope you decide to make this a Buffy and Legolas pairing I think they are the best pairing in these universe. I know it has been many many years since you updated, but I beg you please please please decide to update again and soon. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [17 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Say What Now?" from Rune
Review:
Middle Earth could use a slayer, the orcs are running wild. So I think Buf-ii should stay and start the Slayer line in Middle Earth. I wonder if the slayer spirit would choose and elf maid?
Review By [Rune] • Date [30 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Say What Now?" from Sweetdoggie
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I know two years is a long time to be away from a story, but I really do with you would continue with this one. I like it. The characterization is good and I'd like to find out what Buffy's ultimate decision will be.
Thanks for the entertainment.
Review By [Sweetdoggie] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hidden Grief." from Vornae
Review:
Well i just discovered this story and I cannot believe it it stopped like that. What are the chances of getting an update?
Review By [Vornae] • Date [26 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Say What Now?" from aerialla
Review:
Wonderful, I just wish that this story would be updated or at least the outline for the rest of the story to be posted.
Review By [aerialla] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hidden Grief." from Yojo
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Amazing job on eliciting emotions from this chapter; Buffy's grief is almost tangible. Very nicely done.
Review By [Yojo] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shoe Express" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
Very nice. And, I think you created a very nice niche for Buffy in the West. She's questioning what her purpose is in this world, if she doesn't have demons and vampires to slay. Now-she can make her way to the west, and rid the race of Men of the lingering evils left by Sauruman.

Great chapter!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [6 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Gift Of Song." from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
I really liked the end to this chapter-how the elves song led her to cry for what she lost.

Great chapter!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Slayer's Plight." from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
I liked this chapter. You portray Buffy's character very well, and I like that you keep up with the shifting POV's.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hidden Grief." from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
I like this reaction better than the catatonic reaction from the series.I mean, I liked Buffy's reaction in the series, but the way you did it seems more Slayer like.


Really like the switches in POV. Not sure I like Haldir at the moment, but he still has a cool POV.

Great chapter!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Child of the Earth." from pezz
Review:
Wonderful fic! I do hope to read more.
Review By [pezz] • Date [6 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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