Review of chapter "Out of the Frying Pan" from renelf
Review:
Poor Jonathan.
You're too harsh on your own writing. That story totally did not suck. It was very cool and the twist was sufficiently twisty. The crack gave away and apparation but I didn't expect it to be Wormtail. Excellent tale for 20 minutes.
Review of chapter "Out of the Frying Pan" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I won't call it a master piece, but it was well written.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for saying so. i don't feel so bad about it now. It's no where near where I wanted when I got the idea for a Jonathan-Peter Pettigrew story. It just went it's own way. (As plot bunnies sometimes do.)
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [30 Apr 05] • Not Rated