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Review of chapter "Fish and tea parties" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Delirium cares what Miss Edith thinks? Awesome.

You portray the room like it's alive, and it is - because it's a self-aware dream? Neat.

Everyone's portrayed nicely, with quotes but not too many.

Dream sounds like himself. The predator line sounds just about right, he is also in the business of nightmares after all ;)

Very cool :D
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [24 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fish and tea parties" from ElvenBookwyrm
Review:
This was a lovely story. I think you captured Drusilla's madness quite perfectly; I think that's exactly how she would act towards someone who was just as mad as her.

Follow the fishes!
Comments from author:
Thanks! :) I'm fond of Dru, and I'm happy that everything checked out as 'right' when you read the story.
Review By [ElvenBookwyrm] • Date [26 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fish and tea parties" from Dragonhulk
Review:
Truly insane, that means that it was absolutely perfect.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Dru's always fun to write, and I've always thought that she and Delirium would get on well. ;)
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [20 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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