I know all about not updating stories for years, so I can't really moan about that. Nonetheless, I just came across this again yesterday, and I thought I'd let you know there are still people out there who'd be interested if you felt able to come back to it.
Best wishes to you, -Scott
Review By [bookworm] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Not Rated
ok - love the whole fic!. Making Dawn an alpha was great. alos liked the email names of the scoobies. Loved the characterization of Giles and the interaction between Spike and Dawn.
I could not give this a 10 however. I never give a story a 10 when it hasn't been updated in almost 2 years! Figures, I find a fic I really really like and it's unfinished and not been updated in a dragon's age... my pet peeve with this site. I know real life gets in the way, or the muse ups and takes a long vacation, or sometimes the author gets bored with the story. But I would appreciate it if you could let the readers know if this was going to be update or if you are now posting at another site. Your profile says that you plan to finish this story... hope you update soonest!
Review By [Silver] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
This is a great fic and really interesting. I find it interesting that you made dawn an alpha, not surprised cuz i alos believe she would be. I also like the email names you picked out for all of them, very spiffy! So i'll be waiting for you to finish, so don't forget! :)
I got to love Faith when she tells Jean-Claude: “Look here, tall, dead, and girly. I stay. Spike stays. You got a problem with it, too fucking bad. We do our job, and we go home. You stay the hell out of our way, we’re five by five. You fuck with us, we fuck back. Any questions? No? Good.” Anita needs to see she's not the biggest, baddest woman on the block now. Great update.
Review By [romero] • Date [25 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Yahoooo! Great to see another chapter. I hope this means the job sitch has cleared up for you. I'm going through that myself right now. I love how faith told JC off and Richard's reaction and Anita's cluelessness. Also how Giles called everyone children. I was hoping he was including Richard in that. I can't wait to see wha Dolph and Zerbowski make of the gang. It should be interesting. I'm looking forward to the next date with Dawn and Richard. Also the next chapter in the Lupa race. Please write more soon. I miss this story! Great job :)
Comments from author:
I don't see Dolph showing up, since at this time in the books he was kinda suspended. But, now that you mention it, I bet his reaction to them would be interesting, 'cause by Dolph's standards, a slayer would probably be too 'not human' to be trusted. Damn biggot. I'll try to be better with updates, if my muse lets me, seeing as I'm off on medical for another month...
Review By [boo] • Date [24 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]