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Review of chapter "Master Plots and Plans 9-13" from blakegatomon
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I totally loved this story. You nailed Willow's characterization and your OCs were all relatable and believable. I'm hoping there's a part 2 to this somewhere in the works.
Review By [blakegatomon] • Date [16 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Master Plots and Plans 9-13" from deathgeonous
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In my own humble opinion, this is one of your best works. So, thanks for writing this, and goodbye for now. Now, on to the sequel!
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [29 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nightmares & Invisible Girls" from Harry
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Normal nightmares are one thing. But now, Sabertooth is coming to Sunnydale! This may spell trouble for Willow.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Birthday Cards" from Harry
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Well, these two letters really brightened up Magnus' day. Now, lets see if the letters he sends out bring a visitor to his prison.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Telling Opa" from Harry
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Well, Opa now knows that Eric is Magneto. But, what effect will this have on Willow and the rest of her family?
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Tree" from Harry
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Well Willow, you started the research. Just wait till you find out who Eric is: MAGNETO!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To The Rescue" from WebSpyder
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Why would Xavier or anyone of the X folks suspect that Willow might be a compatible donor for Erik when they hadn't the first clue that they were even related?
Review By [WebSpyder] • Date [12 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Views Into the Future" from WebSpyder
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In reference to your note at the end of the chapter, the word cerebro is the combining form of the word cerebrum which is Latin for brain. The choice to use this as the name for a machine that amplifies psionic mutation is pretty obvious at that point.
Review By [WebSpyder] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Master Plots and Plans 9-13" from deathgeonous
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This is probably one of the best Buffy/X-Men Crossovers out there. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [17 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Master Plots and Plans 9-13" from chrysanthemum
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Fantastic story. I liked the youth of the characters, and your inclusion of political issues was interesting. Victor and Willow were awesome :) thanks for a great read!
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Master Plots and Plans 9-13" from Rune
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Nicely written, the tie in with X-men is well done. I notice you have not addressed the insight Willow had when Logan and Vic were fighting yet. Are their minds their own or have they been tampered with?

Vic and Cordy? Could be fun. Are you going pair Amy with anyone? And Xander and Tracie, will they work out? I'm guessing no because of how Xander treated Willow. If the Xan-boy can't handle Willow as a mutant then how will he handle Tracie as a demon? Maybe you could match Tracie with an X-student?

Thanks for the story.
Review By [Rune] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nightmares & Invisible Girls" from Rune
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Rating, 8 because I'm not done yet. But HOW can Erik mail a letter to Sabertooth? Getting mail I understand, and its likely been read before Erik gets it. Mail to family I get, and once again someone likely reads it before it leaves the prison.

But HOW can mail to a "dangerous mutant" not get censored?

If you close the plot hole before I finish the fic then good.

The 8 is a temp rating atm.
Review By [Rune] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Master Plots and Plans 9-13" from Mordare
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Awesome story. I am very surprised there are not more reviews. I look forward to the rest of the series.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Tree" from Nekromos
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Interesting premise so far, although I feel I should point out that Magneto was not born 'Eric Lehnsherr', but 'Max Eisenhardt'. He changed his name to Eric Lehnsherr after the death of his daughter Anya.
Review By [Nekromos] • Date [10 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Master Plots and Plans 9-13" from ptbptb
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Very nice story. The X-men vs Magneto tension and odd relationship was handled well, and the 'mutant menace' friction was introduced realistically without going over the top.

My only quibble is that you overdid the Xander bashing a bit. I'd be the first to admit that Xander sometimes really ****s things up, but from the start of this story it's been less of that and more like he's just an arsehole. I don't think that's an accurate characterisation.
Review By [ptbptb] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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