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Review of chapter "Chapter XIV" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
I second Seak's review ;)

Interesting wish, good to see a Sunnydale that had happened without Willow. I think Faith going AU before Sunnydale was rather weird and unexplained though.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wish" from Dapsy
Review:
Uh.. huh..? That was... something.... yes, Wicked Willow? Ivy in Sunnydale..? Oh boy.
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [14 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter XIII" from Seak
Review:
Just like to point out that you've repeated chapter twelve into chapter thirteen and chapter thirteen is missing.
Review By [Seak] • Date [26 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter XIV" from Darklight
Review:
Damn ended to soon, but the sequel got a lot of potential, get the chapters out fast. Ivy and Cordy retaining some memories and going after Willow and Faith, can't wait to see what changes you'll make.

Keep the chapters coming
Review By [Darklight] • Date [17 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter VI" from CPTSkip
Review:
Cool story. I still have no idea of what is going on, but I like the finding-out process.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter IV" from Darklight
Review:
Great going, like the addition and change of Harmony and Faith, coming to the rescue of Cordy, can't wait too see how things changed for Cordy because of her wish.

Keep teh chapters coming
Review By [Darklight] • Date [7 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter II" from feynstrom
Review:
I don't get it. Why all the side effects to the wish. All Cordy said was "Go away!" She didn't even add "and stay there!" so what's preventing Anya and Willow of coming back as with their arrival in Gotham City the wish has already been fulfilled, completely.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [5 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
First, I like your story so far. But, my goddess, two cliffhangers in one chapter!?! You are obviously a sadistic monster, but you write good stuff. Please update soon. There is one odd thing about your story. You seem to have a lot of unnessissary "-"s stuck in the middle of various words. Just thought you should know.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well... glad this isn't the end for Cordelia - but depsite the mystery more information is needed for me to understand this chapter. Instead of revealing what's going on exactly (keeping the mystery), try revealing some more of the 5 senses details, or have somone from the universe talk to her from their point of view.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter II" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Not really sure where you sent Cordelia or why her wish would make her "get sent" anywhere. The Anya part of the story worked better for me in this chapter.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wish" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Unexpected but amazingly well done (I thought you'd make Cordy into WW).
I'm glad to see you're continuing this story,and I hope you make Willow re-deamable.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 May 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wish" from CPTSkip
Review:
Interesting start. I like the idea of Wicked Willow and look forward to seeing what you do with your premise.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 May 05] • Not Rated
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