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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from lorwen
Review:
good story...
wish there were more...
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope you will find inspiration to continue this story.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 Mar 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Good start.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [30 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from TarnishedGold
Review:
I liked this story it has a good original idea and shows some great potential, but you need to watch your spelling. In particular:

Collage - work of visual arts made from an assemblage of different forms, thus creating a new whole
College - educational institution

Keep up the good work.
Gold
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [19 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like the world-building, and some of the asides about Adam Pierson aka Methos. There really hasn't been much conflict yet, although the readers know there can be a lot of it in these worlds.

I'd like to see a flash-back of the quarter that Adam taught at Sunnydale -- and find out if that was while Giles was still working at the high school or when it was.

I like both Xander and Richie as characters - I would like to see you dramatize them some more. Nice handling of Dawn, too so far. Okay on Buffy and Giles - we haven't seen much of them yet, but what you showed was fine.

I also like how you have an aisde that these people who heal (immortals) are immune to curses, meaning that the origin of the immortals might even be from a wish. That would also explain why the magic-practicing watchers can't know of them -- they might be magically blocked.

So here it is: college has an "e" in it but collage is a word, too. It means putting things together to make something new and is short for bricollage from the French. It is usually used as an art term. And as you can tell from above, we somehow say the "t" but no "t" in Richie.

Thanks for sharing the tale and the tour.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Rivana
Review:
I'm liking this fic muchly. Please keep going, this sliding doors thing is frustrating. I want to see some resolutions.
Review By [Rivana] • Date [5 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from rob2
Review:
Story looks pretty good so far, but the last couple of chapters really need a spell check. Got to say I really like Xander as an immortal stories, and Richie is my favorite Highlander character, just please, please don't slash them up!


Rob
Review By [rob2] • Date [5 May 05] • Not Rated
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