This story was so interesting! And getting more so! The false alien king plotting to get rid of Xander. The fake kings daughter already in SunnyD ready to act on her father's orders. Ava, genetically Xander's mother, ready to come back into the picture. Her two enemies seemed very likely to get involved if they found out about Xander. Nobody knew that these new people in Xander's life were actually his real family, and the biggest secret of al...Xander was actually an alien prince! Powers and all! I would have loved to see this story completed.
Comments from author:
I would love to see it complete as well. But really life got in the way of my writing. and I dont have time like I used to. and I lost a lot of my notes a few years back in a storm. I still write a few chapters of new stuff. but I havent put anything up.
Review By [kayron] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Well i read it again, it was even better but i really hope that you will eventually add another chapter. I could so see this as a Xander/Multi ship because of their misconceptions. The idea that they all think he's sexing up three rather beautiful women all older and set in their fields of study means that they are even more impressed. I find that funny, of course i'm also curious about what Oz thinks of Willow's new obsession with Xander.
Likely nobody will read this since the story was last updated four years ago, but I'm going to comment anyway. I liked this story. It was good! Sorry if it seems mean, but I thought it was hilarious the way Queen C was slowly going nuts! I also thought that it was funny the way that everyone assumed that Xander was sleeping with those women! It would have been interesting to see what powers Faith might develop. It would have been interesting to see Tess part 2 come after her baby boy. Tess was a Mama on a mission!!! She killed anyone that looked wrong at her baby! I imagine that Ava would be the same. I would have liked to see how Prince Xan handled the usurper king too. I'd have loved to have seen Giles' reaction when he found that Xander wasn't a dark magic use. Instead he was an alien prince. Lot's of good elements to this story.
Review By [kayron] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I do plan on writing more of this. but it might be a while. I want to finish off my old stories. I have started to rewrite them to make them a better read. and to get rid of all the mistakes I have made while writing them. I have started with Cowboy then move on. I am going for popularly.
Review By [WingZero] • Date [19 Apr 09] • Not Rated
This is one of my favorite stories. It actually got me to watch Roswell Season one. The mix of humor and drama in this story is the perfect mix. Eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Review By [Kensington] • Date [22 Oct 08] • Not Rated
please don't let this story be dead.. it was really just getting to the good parts.. pleeeeeease..
Comments from author:
been working on the next one. I even got some of it writen down in the last three days. (which is good for me). will try to get some new parts out soon. but no promises.