I was just re-reading alot of your fics. I just got through this and thought that that it would be good if you finished this. I find it funny though if you had the spell kick in during Dawn's talk causing the key to add in lusty sexy thoughts to it all.
The green eye flash shows hyena bits which are nearly always fun. I'd dare you to have Joyce quickly dress as Bast and drag out Dawn to get over her embrassment.
Hadn't run across this one before yet, very good though. Anything that makes me laugh so hard I choke gets a ten. I also loved the scenes between Xander and Mrs. Summers. "Ruins the fantasy." Heh. I think most all of us have one, don't we?
Review By [Genericrandom] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
While I was never a real Adam West Batman fan, this cracks me up every time I read it, and I'm ecstatic that you've returned with your Horde of Muses to it. The image of Buffy groping Xander while her sister, Willow and Joyce look on with amazement, jealousy, and amusement - which and in what combination goes to which person, you decide - as Xander stands in shock is hilarious.
The alterations the costumes make in their wearers is going to be larger than most stories, I think, since Willow now /knows/ Xander sees her as desirable, Buffy is interested now, I think, and Dawn's outfit might just reduce, if not eliminate that pesky age barrier Xander has at this point...
... BUT...
This is where the costume /he/ wore kicks in. If he has the same outfit from the TV show, I can't really see it as having impressed the ladies as much as they seem to have been. Looked at some pictures from the show, and the thing - while body conforming to some degree - had rather baggy near boxer shorts, so I can't see why Buffy & Co. would be impressed with his... "talents". So maybe I'm picturing the wrong suit due to Xander being... well, Xander during his Joyce Flirtage??? As I say, I lot will depend upon /which/ version of the Batsuit he's wearing during and after the Halloween Incident... and whether /this/ Batman is more like the original, who really didn't have a problem with reversing death traps so that if they were sprung, the bad guy died instead of him and/or innocents... Which I can see Xander doing quite easily...
And besides, why shouldn't Xander prefer the company of an mature, lovely woman such as Joyce... I can see all sorts of fun possibilities from a Summers Ladies/Willow/Cordelia/Drucilla round robin of flirting...
Review By [trongod] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Not Rated