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Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Vibes" from Ltlconf
Review:
Howdy,

Damn, you really never intend to come back to it? Too bad, 'cause this is one of the few good Lara Croft stories with Faith. And as you note well in this story (in a roundabout way) Faith, far more than Buffy, has the personality to mesh well with Lara!

Please, just think of all the havok these two brunettes can get into!

And no, I don't think Buffy was off color but very much IN character. Buffy is NOT always sweetness and light nor always fair to people.
Buffy (as much as I love her) can be a self righteous "I'm always right in my decisions and 'bout people" git alot of times and nothing, short of having the planet fall on her, will shake her view of someone (or their being a hot male vamp that's good in bed). It's her worse flaw, but a good source of drama, humor, teeth-grinding frustration, and makes her human. Fact is Lara's right: Faith is just as dangerous to HER without a gun as with (right close to her much of the time after all). Besides Slayer's aren't bullet proof and in her "job" Faith having no response (how many times is Lara pinned down by fire?) IS a liability. And last but not least the only way for Faith to truly become trustworthy is (especially as it's NEVER happened yet, even BEFORE she switched sides) is to be FULLY trusted. Lara gets that and is tasking the risk no one seems to invested in...except Giles anyhow!

Anyways, shame this is dead.


The Cracker!
Review By [Ltlconf] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Vibes" from Cmiller
Review:
*poke* Hey author dude are you going to come back and add more to this story?
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Vibes" from CustomeHeroine
Review:
Wow, one of the better-written fics of this variety I've read. Please update. You've got me on the edge of my seat now.
Comments from author:
Unfortunately this story is on hiatus. But thank you for the review!
Review By [CustomeHeroine] • Date [7 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Vibes" from (Recent Donor)faithfan
Review:
IS this The End? The story is marked as complete, but the Authors note refers to a follow up chapter?

A/N: Yes, I realize this was a bit of off-color/angry Buffy, but I assure you it will be reasonably explained in the next chapter.

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Comments from author:
I think that this story was accidentally marked as complete. I'll go back and correct that. But I haven't worked on this story in a long time, and I don't forsee any updates in the near future unfortunately.
Review By [(Recent Donor)faithfan] • Date [17 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Vibes" from tsukiyomichan
Review:
Actually, that kind of struck me as a pretty dead on Buffy. She kinda went down hill towards the end of the series. Good story, I would love to see more of it. Peace >^^
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. My muse kinda abandoned me on this fic, but I'll re-read it and see what I can come up with. :)
Review By [tsukiyomichan] • Date [23 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Vibes" from debio
Review:
I will await further chapters. I thought that Buffy and Faith were better after Sunnyhell collapsed?
Review By [debio] • Date [24 Dec 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Vibes" from Darklight
Review:
Oh yeah Faith's watcher put Buffy in her place liked it, lara rocks.

Liked the part of Faith having told her everything what she did and happened to her.

Could be fun to have Lara tell Buffy off and maybe even blame her a little for what went down during the fight in which Faith killed the deputy. Buffy was the more expierenec slayer and set up the Flinch to be taken out, and screamed at the last moment that he wasn't a vamp, etc.

Keep teh chapters coming can't wait too see Faith on her first mission with Lara hunting relics and getting paid and a fair share in the loot, and the use of guns and other gadets of all kind of weapons and others. Liked Lara's fighting robot.
Review By [Darklight] • Date [23 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Vibes" from wrightie
Review:
Good story progresion. Like the idea of Lara getting Faith to adapt to her world.
Review By [wrightie] • Date [23 Jul 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uncomfortable Vibes" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I can see Buffy's point about the gun thing. Plus guns are not the weapons for a Slayer. And I'm not sure if Lady Craft should place Faith in situations that Faith needs a gun.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [23 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Really Hot Woman" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Of course Xander would think that. (The world is doomed. *grin*)
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [25 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Really Hot Woman" from CPTSkip
Review:
By the gods this is such a great story with so many possibilities. The mental image of Faith and Lady Croft together is worth the price of admission. The two characters actually look like they could be sisters or cousins and their two personalities are similar, but different enough for lots of conflict. Not to mention the whole ultra dry sense of humor they both have. I can't wait to read more. Oh, and by the way, you write really well also. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thanks for taking the time to review, and in such a positive fashion. I'm glad you liked this chapter. I will try to update once a week, we'll see how that goes...or where the story goes. I've never posted a story that I planned to add on to. I usually post everything once it is complete. I am not a big fan of falling in love with a series and then getting to the end to realize it is incomplete.
Thanks again.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Really Hot Woman" from wrightie
Review:
very good.
liked the idea of having it from Xanders view point.
Review By [wrightie] • Date [25 May 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ramifications of Stealing" from raven
Review:
Nice cross, interesting possibilities for future stories. Only concern I had was the name of Giles's assistant is the same as Lara's butler. I thought at first that he was now working for Giles, and that was the cross. Might want to rename her at some point.
Comments from author:
Oops. I wasn't even aware that I had the same name for Giles' assistant. I'll go back and change that when I add more chapters. Thanks for pointing that out.
Review By [raven] • Date [18 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ramifications of Stealing" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Faith and Lara? Those two can do a lot of damage. Lara could learn Faith about 'etiquet'.
Comments from author:
Yeah, can you just imagine all the mischief Lara and Faith could get into? Haha. And all the stuff they could teach one another? Thanks for the feedback.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [18 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ramifications of Stealing" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
I'm not sure who to feel more sorry for... Faith or Lara :-). Interesting pairing idea. I wouldn't have imagined Lara Croft to have the patience to be a watcher... or Faith willing to give up her independance to accept one.

I'm curious to see where you plan on going with this... this part is amusing.
Comments from author:
Great comments. Hopefully I'll be able to go somewhere with this story that you will enjoy! Thanks.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [18 May 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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