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Review of chapter "Coda" from Rune
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So is Jareth still the goblin king? And will Toby be the Prince? Would that make Dawn a Princess? Its a wonderfilled fantastic finished story, but an epilog or small sequel would be nice. Thanks.
Review By [Rune] • Date [3 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Underground" from BuffyKaibaHunt
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Brilliant! I like this chapter -- especially the reference to the episode Help from Season 7 and how you mentioned Cassie Newton. (I like her, as she reminds me of myself, me being a poet and publishing stuff online.)

“So tell me more about this guy you met on the tube,” said Buffy around a mouthful of Cheerios the next morning. Dawn had called early, wanting to talk before she headed out for another gruelling day at RADA.

“Did you hear me?” asked Dawn, exasperated. “I met Alan Rickman ! He’s my tutor for Shakespeare in Performance!”

“I heard you,” replied Buffy. “But I want to know about this guy. Was he cute?”

“I guess,” said Dawn. “He was really friendly to begin with but then he went kind of quiet and strange.”

“Weird,” commented the Slayer.

“I think I may have put him off,” explained Dawn. “There was a lull in the conversation so I quoted a line from one of Cassie’s poems.”

Silence fell and Dawn knew that Buffy was thinking about Cassie Newton, the girl she couldn’t save.

How extraordinary! :) I'm sure Cassie would've been proud to hear Dawn quoting a line from one of her poems.
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [7 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coda" from Dogfire
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I love this story!
Review By [Dogfire] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coda" from skrybspryt
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This story is amazing, you've made me want to read more Labyrinth crossovers.
Review By [skrybspryt] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coda" from drealle
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What a perfect ending. Now, whenever I watch "Labyrinth", I will always think of little Toby all grown up and with Dawn. I love the themes of this story - second chances, the persistence of love, and ties that bind us to our family. You found for Sarah the one person who truly sees and understands her, and you have matured Dawn into a passionate and talented young woman. Thank-you for bringing alive the world of the British theatre, and interweaving it with magic and mystery.
Review By [drealle] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coda" from catyuy
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This is a perfecr ending.
Thank you so much.
Review By [catyuy] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coda" from Eureka
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Wow.. Just WOW. I loved it. Sarah made sure her brother was safe this time and then followed her heart. She got everything that she wanted and so did he. Plus Cassie is safe. I really can't believe that this story is finished, I kinda wish it was still being written. (Not in a bad way, just that I LOVE this story.) It actually made me start to tear up. (Although that might happen to be because I am 6 months pregnant. LOL) Hope to read more from you.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coda" from AzrielSunHawk
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WOW!! just WOW!! i have loved Labrynth for decades. my children love it now, as well. thank you for so seemlessly combining 2 of my favorites. when i started reading this? i could not stop. i am not a dawn fic fan, but this? was WELL worth the read. you did a FABULOUS job. i told my daughter about it and so she will be reading it as well. i stand in awe. seriously WELL DONE!!
Review By [AzrielSunHawk] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coda" from PrincessTaffy
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Well, like I said before, I'm really glad you finished it, but at the same time, it seemed a little bit, unfinished, as if it ended too abruptly. That might be just because of the long wait though, and I'm sure you were anxious to finally get it done. I hope this isn't the last we see of you!
Review By [PrincessTaffy] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from PrincessTaffy
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Wow, I am so excited you are working on this again!!! It seems like it's very rare for a forgotten fic to be finished up years later, so this is extra special. I know I've read it at least twice before, but I went ahead and reread the whole thing because it is such a great story, and so well written. I can't wait to see more!
Comments from author:
Thanks again for the reviews. The story is now complete.
Review By [PrincessTaffy] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from catyuy
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I'm so happy to see this updated and to know that it will be finished.
Comments from author:
All done. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [catyuy] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from Scrappychic
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OMG, this story is so wonderful. Labyrinth is one of my favourite all time movies and the cross here is perfect.

It would have been so easy to go with the whole "Buffy jumps off the tower and ends up in the Labyrinth", or something like that. But you didn't go with the easy story, you went with a new and completely stunning, wonderful, original idea, and it definitely paid off for you in the end. I can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
I did write a Dawn jumps off the tower and ends up on the SeaQuest but the theatre stuff was actually really fun to research. The story is now finished. Hope you enjoy the ending.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from Eureka
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Very good set of chapters. Glad you decided to dig this one up and work on it. Can't wait to see what Xander is supposed to do...
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. I wish I could put a diagram of Sarah's room up to make the story a bit clearer. I hope you enjoy the ending.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Piece of Cake" from catyuy
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I've read this story a couple of times.
But I always forget to review.
I really love it and hope to see an update someday.
Comments from author:
Your optimism has paid off. I plan to complete this story by the end of this week. Thanks for the review!
Review By [catyuy] • Date [3 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Piece of Cake" from Eureka
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I know that is has been what 4 years since you last updated this story, but I do hope that you finish it since I couldn't stop reading it till I read ALL 18 chapters. I noticed that you had remarked that you had a hard time with updates because they are a difficult pairing with Jareth being so complicated, and I agree he is complicated.
Comments from author:
Never give up hope! Although I haven't decided exactly what's going to happen with Jareth and Sarah, I will get this story finished.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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