Wonderful story. I may be more of a Malcolm fan, but that bit with Trip was perfect. Any plans in the works for more? Quite a few possibilities open at the end. Then again, this is more like a "choose your own adventure" ending...
Comments from author:
Thankyou. I think the English in me likes Malcolm but he didn't quite fit into the story... especially when he's often written as the stuck up Brit...
Review of chapter "The Key Incident" from greylight
Review:
What a great idea for a story!
Though I must admit, if you have the inclination to add to it, it would make this reader happy. Its got a lot of great potential, but on the other hand you've managed to wrap up the idea so well it doesn't have to have more either. Very good job!
Comments from author:
Thankyou *grin*
No plans to continue right now but that doesn't mean I won't ever.
Review By [greylight] • Date [22 May 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Key Incident" from Davelister
Review:
Damn it! the meter doesn't go high enough!
Please, as one anti Star Wars Trekkie to another, I am begging you to continue this story, I don't care that it was intended as a short, it deserves more chapters!
In other words: keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thankyou. I'm not always anti-StarWars... just this week, maybe.
I'm not planning on continuing the story right now, but maybe someday.
Review By [Davelister] • Date [22 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Key Incident" from SamDragon
Review:
I like it.More wanted please.
Comments from author:
Thankyou.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [22 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
