Review of chapter "Call Me Steel" from dogbertcarroll
So protecting the world from demons and the end of existence isn't as important as two bit terrorists? It's a decent setup, but it really doesn't work.
Review By [dogbertcarroll
] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Call Me Steel" from Wynde
I'm not familiar with the cartoon this was based on but it certainly seemed to have far more potential than some of the other 'Xander has a secret identity' stories that I've read. Particularly if this secret identity looks completely different and isn't trying to get into the pants of women anywhere from 15 to 20 years his senior. Okay that last one is just a pet peeve of mine. LOL Pretty good even if it is just a one shot. You seemed to get across the basic premise without getting bogged down in details or being too vague that the reader is lost and as I said it does have the potential to be able to go on if you wanted it too.
Review By [Wynde
] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]