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Review of chapter "Part 4 and Epilogue" from Addlcove
Review:
As a major fan of Max Payne as well as xander I have to say this is one of the best pieces I have read in a long time.

I would hope for a sequel eventually although I can understand that incorporating the story into a greater AU might take a bit of work, especially if done as seamlessly as this "short" story.

Fingers crossed for a sequel and let me again say "good job" a true pleasure to read this.
Comments from author:
*If* I do a sequel to this, it would be a number of short stories incorporated into Seasons 1-3, ending with Graduation.

As to the possibility of doing that sequel, it's possible, but not in the near future - I'm working on Fratello and a possible NCIS x-over.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 4 and Epilogue" from DavidFraser
Review:
Yeh!! A good read... To be continued..?
Review By [DavidFraser] • Date [18 Apr 07] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 4 and Epilogue" from Bobboky
Review:
very cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 4 and Epilogue" from Bill
Review:
OUTSTANDING! Can I have some more please?
Review By [Bill] • Date [19 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 4 and Epilogue" from TOM
Review:
One of the best Halloween/crossover I've ever read.Short,coherent,action-packed,insightful...A great job!
Review By [TOM] • Date [14 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 4 and Epilogue" from TOM
Review:
A good Halloween story.How many of them anyway? Thousands?
But I won't complain,they're so much fun to read when they're well-done like yours.And I love S2 stories.

What I like in that story is that it's not about being granted amazing super-powers from comics super-heroes but of acquiring fighting skills from two hired-killers.
These skills come with a price : the lingering sadness of lost innocence for our two protagonists.
Cordelia and Xander were very touching in the last part.
Great job!
Review By [TOM] • Date [27 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 4 and Epilogue" from banner
Review:
That was exciting and fun, with a deeply satisfying ending.
I felt a great deal of sympathy for Payne - and I'd never heard of him before. You made him seem very real. Thanks for a good read.
Review By [banner] • Date [14 Sep 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 4 and Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Really good story here. You did both Mona and Max real good, and I like how you intergrated them with Xander and Cordy. Hope you write a seque!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [14 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 4 and Epilogue" from war
Review:
great story hope you do sequel
Review By [war] • Date [14 Sep 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 4 and Epilogue" from CPTSkip
Review:
I really liked your story. I thought you did an excellent job with the Scoobie's characters and their transformed ones. While I know your story is complete, I wouldn't mind reading a follow-up and see Xander and Cordy kick some evil creature's butts.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 4 and Epilogue" from karinms
Review:
I liked the story though I've never played the game and barely know what the crossover was all about. Be sure to keep writing, I'm looking forward to read more of your stories.

/Karin
Review By [karinms] • Date [14 Sep 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3" from war
Review:
great story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [14 Aug 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2" from Alltorian
Review:
Yeah, another chapter. So they've finally met, what'll happen now? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Please keep writing.
Review By [Alltorian] • Date [24 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2" from Lorency
Review:
That's awesome. Really awesome.

peace out
Review By [Lorency] • Date [24 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2" from war
Review:
interesting story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [24 May 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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