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Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from takamerlin
Review:
Ok, no really where's the rest of it. please please please tell you've got it somewhere on a harddrive gathering dust and oops you just forgot to finish posting this. please
Review By [takamerlin] • Date [17 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from peppermint
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I hope you update this story soon
Review By [peppermint] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from Hawkehunt
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That... sounds painful. Not what I was expecting.
Review By [Hawkehunt] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from jgoodman
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Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [18 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from Vickzie
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Oh no poor Jack and Xander! Please update some more soon
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from SEAborg
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This is pretty cool. Having Glory join Xander is, IMO, an awesome idea. It's merely a pity that this story is no longer being updated.
Review By [SEAborg] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lost Son" from (Current Donor)jcon
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Just found this story. Very intriguing. The characters are well written and developing well. Bringing in Glory in a major factor for Xander to be able to do much.
Hope that one day you may come back to this story and finish it off.
Review By [(Current Donor)jcon] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from Nummy
Review:
Damn this story is really good. I wish you would continue it.
Review By [Nummy] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from serenityselena
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oh my ....
this is not good ... not good at all ...
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fly away home." from winnie
Review:
I started this story this morning and was enjoying it.
wondering if you might be going back to finish it? well, on to reading the rest of what's here.
Review By [winnie] • Date [21 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from eset
Review:
Fantastic story so far. Any chance of more?

So far you've skirted Jack's discovering the supernatural. Is he going to? Do they think Xander's been possessed by a goa'uld? How are Sara and Mike dealing with this--I imagine they'll need to discuss what happened with each other at least--and Jack can't keep their son's disappearance from her too long. What's Glory up to?

Please continue this. I want to know what happens.
Review By [eset] • Date [6 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from (Past Donor)Peaslums
Review:
Having Tony off himself is worth an instant 10 rating.

Oh, and the rest is pretty good too. I'm not going to be specific since it's been 3 years, but the beginning could use a bit of a touch up. It doesn't flow all that well.
Review By [(Past Donor)Peaslums] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from greysh
Review:
Great fic! I really like this crossover and how you write Xander!
I hope that you will continue with this fic.
Please update soon . I really wish to know what is going to happen to xander.
Review By [greysh] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from Gideon
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Well I didn't see that coming. Poor Xander! I hope their agreement covers her leaving all his friends in Sunnydale alive too?
Let me guess - she is going to go and see Wolfram and Heart? Has Angel taken over there yet in your timeline?
I hope you get a chance to add a few more chapters to this story at some stage!!!
If you feel you have lost track of the plot a bit feel free to redo a couple of the last few chapters and see if you like it any better I wouldn't like to see you written into a corner!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Make With The Explanation." from Godogma
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Started good but I'm really not interested in continuing to read it even if you do update it. Prophecies and Glory were/are both stupid plot lines and there is little to no characterization in the story so we're seeing very little character growth and a whole lot of moving the plot forward with cliche attacks and the characters constantly getting shit on.

I enjoyed the story to start with but the latter chapters/ending were just ... meh. You're a good author, but the plot just wasn't for me and I can't stand angst fests or Glorificus for that matter. That plot line was almost as stupid as the First Evil plot line, crack head Joss should really have kept tighter reins on his writing staff.

I'm going to check out some of your other work and see if I like it better.
Review By [Godogma] • Date [16 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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