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Review of chapter "First Lesson" from Tina
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ohhh i liked this a lot. I got chills reading that part where Padme/First was telling Vader what she was. Very nice ending too. We all know what happens next.
Review By [Tina] • Date [11 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from RevDorothyL
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Very neat! (And shame on me for thinking the First was going to say, "Ani, I am your Father", 'cause that would just be too cliched, even for the First Evil.)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from canadiangodess
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Cool story!! The Other is Buffy right? Great Job!!
Review By [canadiangodess] • Date [21 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from Cassie
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great story
Review By [Cassie] • Date [14 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from AmberPenglass
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Now this was interesting. I don't suppose plan on continuing? Though I really couldn't see how... But it would be interesting if Vader found out more about the First and who the 'Other' was, who I am assuming is Buffy... Very thought-provoking. Wonderfully done. ^_^
Review By [AmberPenglass] • Date [8 Sep 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from Odjn
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Is this a one-shot?
Review By [Odjn] • Date [29 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from RougeMage
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This was a very cool take on the dark side of the Force. It's really quite intresting how the First is trying to manipulate Vadar.
Review By [RougeMage] • Date [7 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from (Past Donor)Anneliese
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Very nice. I liked the way you dealt with Darth Vader and his . . . intelligence. I swear, there were times during episode three when I just wanted to bang Anakin's head against the wall. Apparently I wasn't the only one who wanted to according to your interpretation of the First Evil in your fic. :) It's a very nice stand alone fic.
Review By [(Past Donor)Anneliese] • Date [28 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from Kirallie
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Cool! Who is the other? Any more top this?
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [28 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from Stacia
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Very nice beginning. I think the characterization is fab. Looking forward to the next part.
Review By [Stacia] • Date [28 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from Goddessa
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Hmm.... sounds promising. The OTHER is Buffy right?? Are you gonna make Anakin go good again? Keep it up. Can you pleeeeeeease make it Buffy/Angel???
Review By [Goddessa] • Date [28 May 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from Antonio
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Interesting but who is the other: Luke?
And is this fic in the same universe that Trinity?
Review By [Antonio] • Date [28 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from VillageOrchid
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Good characterization piece while punning the title and not being too funny or silly. thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Lesson" from (Past Donor)Mhalachai
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Oh, I love it! It's just so... depressing. And very very First-like. Evil!Padme was nice to read, and Vader unable to keep hate alive was just delicious. Your interpretation of the balance of the Force was interesting. I don't think I've ever seen that one before.

Two thumbs up.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mhalachai] • Date [28 May 05] • Not Rated
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