ohhh i liked this a lot. I got chills reading that part where Padme/First was telling Vader what she was. Very nice ending too. We all know what happens next.
Very neat! (And shame on me for thinking the First was going to say, "Ani, I am your Father", 'cause that would just be too cliched, even for the First Evil.)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Now this was interesting. I don't suppose plan on continuing? Though I really couldn't see how... But it would be interesting if Vader found out more about the First and who the 'Other' was, who I am assuming is Buffy... Very thought-provoking. Wonderfully done. ^_^
Review By [AmberPenglass] • Date [8 Sep 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Very nice. I liked the way you dealt with Darth Vader and his . . . intelligence. I swear, there were times during episode three when I just wanted to bang Anakin's head against the wall. Apparently I wasn't the only one who wanted to according to your interpretation of the First Evil in your fic. :) It's a very nice stand alone fic.
Review By [Anneliese] • Date [28 May 05] • Not Rated
Oh, I love it! It's just so... depressing. And very very First-like. Evil!Padme was nice to read, and Vader unable to keep hate alive was just delicious. Your interpretation of the balance of the Force was interesting. I don't think I've ever seen that one before.
Two thumbs up.
Review By [Mhalachai] • Date [28 May 05] • Not Rated
Anneliese