Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from TrevaRea
Great story! Really wish it wasn't abandoned.
Review By [TrevaRea
] • Date [26 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from FireWolfe
I do hope you return to this work one day soon. It has a lot to offer. I like the twist on theme with each side wary of the others. Please do not let this one die. 10/10 for certain.
Review By [FireWolfe
] • Date [19 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Vickzie
Interesting story so far!
Review By [Vickzie
] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Wolflady
Yay! I thought this story had been long abandoned. Welcome back!
Review By [Wolflady
] • Date [2 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Some You Lose" from Javian
Fantastic story, as much of it as there is. Somehow came upon this again. Funny, the years fly by.
Review By [Javian
] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from AtotheM
Hope you come back to it some day. I like Jack and Buffy testing each other and the idea of off world Vampires. Lots of potential.
Review By [AtotheM
] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from maxthehobbit
I haven't read this, I never read unfinished stories, but I've read your other stories and really like them. Hope you get time to finish this, but since it's been four years I doubt it will ever be finished ... life seems to get in the way of fun so many times.
Review By [maxthehobbit
] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Kalliza
This is extremely well-written, and it saddens me that it appears unlikely to be completed. I want to see how they manage to work together, or not. I, of course, want them to fully trust each other, but them *getting* there ought to be quite fascinating.
Well, here's hoping you pick this up again!
Review By [Kalliza
] • Date [29 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from LostDragon
Are you still willing to write, if so PLEASE return to this one. It is great and left in the limbo it is in should be considered a crime.
Review By [LostDragon
] • Date [29 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from shawnie
This is a good story and I really hope you decide to continue it. Hopefully soon :)
Review By [shawnie
] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Ansku
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from SpacedCadet
I am really enjoying this and hope you finish it soon.
There are a few Britishisms that strike a wrong note:
Girl "Guides" instead of Girl "Scouts" and earlier I noted "industrial estate" rather than "industrial development".
I loved the line about Mr Bell inventing the telephone 500 years ago...it just sounds right for Buffy, tho only when she's being a blond ditz.
Review By [SpacedCadet
] • Date [12 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Tempe
I love this story. In fact I love it so much that my gushing is going to make you want to write more for it, right? Okay, realistically I really am enjoying reading this. I love that Dawn and Buffy are working together and although Jack and Buffy not getting along makes me want to cry sometimes, I also get it and that it's necessary for your story. I am curious about Dawn unintentionally activating the stargate and would really like to see where she was sending the wormhole. I enjoyed Teal'c and Buffy's fight and loved that in the end it was an underhanded move by Teal'c that won the fight and although he was ashamed of himself, Buffy realized that she still had issues with her pride. Anyway, I'm really hoping you'll consider giving this story an ending as I'd love to see where it will go.
Review By [Tempe
] • Date [29 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from anouk
Nice, no instant trust between the two groups :) how rare.
I like this story a lot. Hope you update soon.
Review By [anouk
] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Richardthrnnsx
Came across your work only this weekend. Really enjoyed what I have read so far on this and of the others The Magic of Wormholes is my personal favorite. Hope you are going to continue this story as its an interesting. You do good work, keep it up.
Review By [Richardthrnnsx
] • Date [20 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]