Interesting story so far!

Yay! I thought this story had been long abandoned. Welcome back!

Fantastic story, as much of it as there is. Somehow came upon this again. Funny, the years fly by.

Neat story.

Hope you come back to it some day. I like Jack and Buffy testing each other and the idea of off world Vampires. Lots of potential.

I haven't read this, I never read unfinished stories, but I've read your other stories and really like them. Hope you get time to finish this, but since it's been four years I doubt it will ever be finished ... life seems to get in the way of fun so many times.

This is extremely well-written, and it saddens me that it appears unlikely to be completed. I want to see how they manage to work together, or not. I, of course, want them to fully trust each other, but them *getting* there ought to be quite fascinating.

Well, here's hoping you pick this up again!

Are you still willing to write, if so PLEASE return to this one. It is great and left in the limbo it is in should be considered a crime.

This is a good story and I really hope you decide to continue it. Hopefully soon :)

Intriguing :)

I am really enjoying this and hope you finish it soon.

There are a few Britishisms that strike a wrong note:
Girl "Guides" instead of Girl "Scouts" and earlier I noted "industrial estate" rather than "industrial development".

I loved the line about Mr Bell inventing the telephone 500 years ago...it just sounds right for Buffy, tho only when she's being a blond ditz.

I love this story. In fact I love it so much that my gushing is going to make you want to write more for it, right? Okay, realistically I really am enjoying reading this. I love that Dawn and Buffy are working together and although Jack and Buffy not getting along makes me want to cry sometimes, I also get it and that it's necessary for your story. I am curious about Dawn unintentionally activating the stargate and would really like to see where she was sending the wormhole. I enjoyed Teal'c and Buffy's fight and loved that in the end it was an underhanded move by Teal'c that won the fight and although he was ashamed of himself, Buffy realized that she still had issues with her pride. Anyway, I'm really hoping you'll consider giving this story an ending as I'd love to see where it will go.

Nice, no instant trust between the two groups :) how rare.
I like this story a lot. Hope you update soon.

Came across your work only this weekend. Really enjoyed what I have read so far on this and of the others The Magic of Wormholes is my personal favorite. Hope you are going to continue this story as its an interesting. You do good work, keep it up.

Regards Richard

This story is excellent, I've enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

I don´t agree with the review that said Buffy isn´t a team player. When things are bad she always have the Scoobies helping her. When she learned about the Initiative she joined 2 days later.
She doesn´t trust SGC with all her secrets but neither SGC trust her. Just remember what Daniel said:

"Most of the other conditions can be worked around as we see fit without them being any the wiser if we do it right".