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Review of chapter "Citizen Harris" from spring
Review:
love it. You should however state if this is going to be more than one chapter or not as it is it states that this is not complete and it can be a bit confusing to some readers especially when you have a sequel that is also not complete.
Review By [spring] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Citizen Harris" from Duskie
Review:
If you ever do decide to do more of this I'd read it.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [22 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Citizen Harris" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting..
Review By [Elleria] • Date [20 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Citizen Harris" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting...very interesting...
Review By [Elleria] • Date [17 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Citizen Harris" from Bobboky
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still cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Citizen Harris" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Citizen Harris" from spacey
Review:
utterly kickas
Review By [spacey] • Date [23 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Citizen Harris" from YademosEbyam
Review:
Just to clarify things, Jack's stone (Daniel: "Artifact!") was found on the *planet* where the quantum mirror was found, not in the mirror universe itself. It would be interesting if Xander's stone (Giles: "Artifact!") was in the possession of a demon or sorcerer before he got it. Maybe he picked it up at "Ethan's Costumes" before a certain Halloween. ;) Good story BTW, I'd definitely like to see more (like Xander's friends bringing up the same questions Jack's did, perhaps a bit more *pointedly*).
Comments from author:
You're absolutely right. Shame on me. And that while it was not long ago I saw the episode. On my defense, Jack could mess it up very well too, and it were his thoughts ;)

It's a very good idea. I definitely was aiming for the second season for Xander to have gained the stone. As for Xander's friends questioning Xander was something I purposely left out - too make the story smooth and uncomplicated as much as possible. But, hey could be dealt with.
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [1 Jun 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Citizen Harris" from iroshi
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Oooh, I'd definitely like to see more! That's a fabulously novel premise! Interesting twist on the standard old Xander-knows-about-SG1-because-HalloweenSoldierGuy-was-SGC, etc. I like, and I'd be very interested to see where it goes from there.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [iroshi] • Date [30 May 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Citizen Harris" from azulkan
Review:
Oh goodie, I'll be watching for more. Great little story.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [30 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Citizen Harris" from ChelleyBean
Review:
I like the way you did this. It would be interesting to see some Xander and Jack interaction, and perhaps why each would say they found the other's life 'relaxing'. If I'd been in their shoes, knowing that there was something out there worse or as bad as the goa'uld/demons would have made me invest in stock of pepto bismol
Comments from author:
You're right. But, Xander had more of a 'normal' life (bowling, carpenting etc) than Jack had, while fighting the good fight is something they both do. So, that's something Jack would find 'relaxing'.
Review By [ChelleyBean] • Date [30 May 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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