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Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from imortis
Review:
you know, this sounded like it would have been a good story.
Review By [imortis] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from lilacsandroses
Review:
Hello,

I really hope this story isn't abandoned it is good so far. I hope for the pairings of Buffy/Aragorn they are my favorite pairings and there is not enough of them, in my opinion that is. Please come back soon.
Review By [lilacsandroses] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from bradsan
Review:
I don't get it. You starts two stories and I tell you they both starts good but then nothing. Why don't you update.
Please update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from randyzoopurple
Review:
i loved i wish you would updated it soon
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome story so far, I can't wait to read more. Please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [23 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from spk
Review:
Please, oh please, pick this story back up. I love the premise. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [4 Feb 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from Claddagh
Review:
I just found this, and really liked it. I hope you update soon.
Review By [Claddagh] • Date [13 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
This is good you should really continue it. I hope that this is quite a while before the events in LOTR?
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [22 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from PixieInTheDark
Review:
great chap so far so good keep up the good work.
and can u plz plz plz plz with a cherry on top make it a buffy/legolas pairing
cant wait for nxt chappie.
Comments from author:
I don't think I'm going to continue with the story, unless I get some free time soon. But, I might make it a Buffy/Legolas pairing if I do. Either that or Buffy/Aragorn
Review By [PixieInTheDark] • Date [9 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from Goddessa
Review:
Hmm.... is there any chance that you'll make it Buffy/Angel? Pleeeeeeeeeeease?!!! :) Continue. It sounds intersting.
Comments from author:
Buffy and Angel? Hm, not in this one. But, I was thinking about writins some B/A stuff. They are, afterall, meant to be....
Review By [Goddessa] • Date [7 Jun 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from onlimain
Review:
This is an interesting start. I'll be sure to look out for an update.
Review By [onlimain] • Date [2 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from scarlett
Review:
I think this story is very interesting so far. I like how you have her as an elf. there are not very many stories out there like that besides mine =). which I do need to updat but its so hard to get back into writing again after being away for a while. well I can't wait for the next chapter!
Review By [scarlett] • Date [1 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from Odjn
Review:
Not to be offensive or anything, but you need a beta.

Half the time you're calling her Marilwen and the other half it's Merilwen. It's not a good thing when you can't get the main character's supposed name straight.

Also, as to the use of Whistler... Well, it's a little cliche, don't you think? A little much? It feels like you're rushing things way too much, with her Elfishness and her Slayerness and her memories.
Comments from author:
I agree, my beta has been sick, but she should be able to beta the next chapter, and the rest beyond that.

Cliche? Got to say I agree, this plot bunny was just hitting me in the head, and I needed to get something posted. I mainly loaded the story onto TTH so that I wouldn't accidently delete it (which I tend to do).

Mainly thanks to you, I'm going to go back and edit this chapter quite a bit, I did rush it, and I have a lot more time now, so I can really go back and make it worthwhile.
Review By [Odjn] • Date [31 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Way Home" from marcusaurelius
Review:
Great start! I can't wait to read more :-)
Review By [marcusaurelius] • Date [31 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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