you know, this sounded like it would have been a good story.

Hello,

I really hope this story isn't abandoned it is good so far. I hope for the pairings of Buffy/Aragorn they are my favorite pairings and there is not enough of them, in my opinion that is. Please come back soon.

I don't get it. You starts two stories and I tell you they both starts good but then nothing. Why don't you update.
Please update.

i loved i wish you would updated it soon

Awesome story so far, I can't wait to read more. Please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani

Please, oh please, pick this story back up. I love the premise. :)

I just found this, and really liked it. I hope you update soon.

This is good you should really continue it. I hope that this is quite a while before the events in LOTR?

great chap so far so good keep up the good work.
and can u plz plz plz plz with a cherry on top make it a buffy/legolas pairing
cant wait for nxt chappie.

I don't think I'm going to continue with the story, unless I get some free time soon. But, I might make it a Buffy/Legolas pairing if I do. Either that or Buffy/Aragorn

Hmm.... is there any chance that you'll make it Buffy/Angel? Pleeeeeeeeeeease?!!! :) Continue. It sounds intersting.

Buffy and Angel? Hm, not in this one. But, I was thinking about writins some B/A stuff. They are, afterall, meant to be....

This is an interesting start. I'll be sure to look out for an update.

I think this story is very interesting so far. I like how you have her as an elf. there are not very many stories out there like that besides mine =). which I do need to updat but its so hard to get back into writing again after being away for a while. well I can't wait for the next chapter!

Not to be offensive or anything, but you need a beta.

Half the time you're calling her Marilwen and the other half it's Merilwen. It's not a good thing when you can't get the main character's supposed name straight.

Also, as to the use of Whistler... Well, it's a little cliche, don't you think? A little much? It feels like you're rushing things way too much, with her Elfishness and her Slayerness and her memories.

I agree, my beta has been sick, but she should be able to beta the next chapter, and the rest beyond that.

Cliche? Got to say I agree, this plot bunny was just hitting me in the head, and I needed to get something posted. I mainly loaded the story onto TTH so that I wouldn't accidently delete it (which I tend to do).

Mainly thanks to you, I'm going to go back and edit this chapter quite a bit, I did rush it, and I have a lot more time now, so I can really go back and make it worthwhile.

Great start! I can't wait to read more :-)