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Review of chapter "The Light of the chosen" from JennMarie
It's an interesting concept, but you might want to fix the punctuation problems. Fleshing out the various scenes more would probably help the flow of the story, too. Good luck!
Review By [JennMarie] • Date [25 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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