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Review of chapter "tears fears and sorrows" from SpacedCadet
Review:
“Was there more? Watchers are usually very indebt people when it came to research...”


I think you mean "in-depth people". I assume you mean research deeply rather than going into debt to get information.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [28 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ending left unsaid" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Excellent story!

You have a few problems with the word choices: you are using homonyms for the words you mean: except/accept, their/there and to/too come to mind, and you occasionally forget to say whose POV we are in when it changes, but otherwise, very good!
Comments from author:
I went over it again myself and i tried to catch as much as i could i'm about halfway through but i also asked my current beta to go back and look at it too, so hopefully, we shall be striaght when he's done. Thanks for reading.

Ali
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [28 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Love Me" from SpacedCadet
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“I mean that conversation I had with Asher, it was a real eye opener. I mean I realized some stuff, I was in his head…literally, like before when we first met, accept this time it was different.”

This time it should have been "except" , not "accept".
Comments from author:
I'm going over it so i will catch all those little typos, sorry.Hope i don't lose you as a reader!

Ali
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [28 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hello Again Part Two" from SpacedCadet
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just want to be excepted

She was "excepted", that's what she was trying to get away from. She wants to be "accepted".
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [28 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ending left unsaid" from Red
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I would love to see Asher and Willow to get together.
Review By [Red] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ending left unsaid" from Kirallie
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Poor Willow!! How could Asher do that to her? Willow would be so much better for him than Anita!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ending left unsaid" from CadyNicole
Review:
You finally finished it...I don't know whether to be happy that its done and I know what happened or to be sad that its done and that's all I know...oh well, it was very fitting ending, though I would love to see some Asher-India interaction as she got older, the idea of Asher having to deal with a first date and stuff like that would be hilarious, but I'll take what I can get! Great job!
Review By [CadyNicole] • Date [21 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ending left unsaid" from AnnieD
Review:
Great fic


Between you and me, I think Jason's treated her better than Asher and don't the furry man deserve some love? He gets overlooked so often in the AB books.
Comments from author:
SO RIGHT YOU ARE! I LOVE JASON!! THANKS FOR REVIEWING!
Review By [AnnieD] • Date [5 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ending left unsaid" from littleoldme
Review:
Really awesome fic. I greatly enjoyed. I'd like to see more of India slightly older, ESPECIALLY her interactions with Anita. Kudos for not taking the cliche ending and reuniting Willow and Asher.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Glad you like it, have a great day.

Ali
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [3 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Late Love" from Bunney
Review:
this seems like a good story i wish you would hurry and add more so i could have more plot

later and love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [15 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Late Love" from CadyNicole
Review:
Yay! An Update! I read this story a while ago, but sadly lost track of it. I am a huge fan of 'character with daughter' fics, and as Asher is my favorite Anita Blake Character, I have to say that I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Review By [CadyNicole] • Date [25 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Late Love" from HunterH
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YAY i love this story please keep more chapters coming and soon :)
Review By [HunterH] • Date [15 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Late Love" from DarkRose
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OMG another update you rock so much, I feel spoiled two great additions to this fic in a week. I am loving this fic more and more as it moves along and i can't wait to see what happens next. Will Willow wake up hopefully she will because the story couldn't go any further if she didn't and what will happen when she does. I loved the part where Anita is starting to bond with India, I think Anita will make a good aunt and protector for India. Hopefully Willow and Anita can become friends.All the possible out comes are now running around in my head, Have a great week.

smiles and hugs
Comments from author:
lol ur such a sweetie thank u! who knows what will happen next i know i dont! lol


Ali
Review By [DarkRose] • Date [13 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rescue Me" from DarkRose
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Thank you so much for the update, I loved it so much. congrats for such a wonderful story.

Have a great week and smile xoxoxoxo
Review By [DarkRose] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rescue Me" from HunterH
Review:
OMG will they got to her in time I hope so PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON :)
Review By [HunterH] • Date [11 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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