Very interesting twist. A little choppy in spots, but good flow overall. I hope you come back to this.

Ah! Your story is like a breath of fresh air! It's an interesting alternative to Draco being Spike's long lost nephew or some such. And it's rather refreshing to see Draco as enjoying being the bad guy only to be killed by his own side. I can really see him pulling the "I'm the big-bad" attitude even as he decides not to continue in the path his father set for him.

Thanks for writing! ~"~

I enjoyed your characterization of Draco. I think it is interesting that you made Draco the bad guy instead of the misunderstood not really bad route that most people take when they pair Willow with him.(assuming that you are pairing him with Willow) Spike wasn't all that sweet in the beginning either. So maybe their is still hope for him. But I still wonder how the war turned out.

Draco too is rather curious as to how the war turned out.

Oh poor Willow.This will break her heart.Waiting to see whats next.

Is there more? Please this was great

Wow, I wasn't expecting anything like this! But now that I think about it, the summary does describe it, just not anything like I was anticipating. I loved the first chapter, especially Draco getting knocked off by his father. The more I mull it over, the more I like the second chapter too. How long will it take them to figure it out? I hope more HP characters will be in it. (Funny me saying that, cause I used to not like HP, but it was SG1/HP xovers that eased me into the universe. Now I can't wait until the next movie comes out, and hope to see more HP in this story)

thanks for sharing, look forward to more.

Very intresting... I'd like to see some more soon

Good writing, amusing scenario (with the right amount of darkness and humor).
Please do continue.