Eeee, I gotta say the lord of the dance bit was a little weird, lol! But you've successfully got me hooked so please, PLEASE come back! There's a lot to be said about a story that can draw you in this much on one chapter alone. I can't wait to see what Buffy's first words in Middle-earth will be...the anticipation alone might just kill me ;-)
Review By [pensivegal] • Date [12 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
That was good start! And please don't make this Buffy/Legolas try somthing diffrent say Aragon or Biromir or Faramir or Eomer. But if you make this Buffy/Legolas ..well I will still read it, but there are so many fics with that paring.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [19 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Ok you definitely have caught my interest. I would say you could use a beta! But you are still doing an excellent job of unfolding the story. May I suggest Aragorn/Buffy pairing or Elrond. There are so many Legolas/Buffy pairings. Please continoe. I await your next update.
Review By [Fan2] • Date [11 Jun 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
You've got a great start to what I'm sure will be a great story. Interesting spell to bring Buffy to ME. Another great idea is having her danced there by Sweet. I'm looking foward to seeing how this story progresses. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
You just need to clarify a couple of points: Who did Sweet go after if not Dawn? After all, she stole the necklace. Please, please, please, check your spelling! Rivendale is Rivendell (that's the major one). Most word processors come with spell checkers.
Review By [abeliever] • Date [10 Jun 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Interesting start. The whole Buffy being brought to Middle Earth thing has been done before but i can't wait to see your take on things. Is there going to be a Buffy pairing? I have an inkling it will be Legolas, well at least i hope so. Any way there were a few small typos but i'm sure a beta would be able to help. I'd be happy to help, just e-mail me if your interested.
Review By [Discord] • Date [10 Jun 05] • Not Rated
I think you have a really promising start here and I can't wait to see where you take it. I really like how you brought Buffy into Middle Earth, it's such a change from the Season 5 portal thing, or her dying. As for pairings, it kinda depends on how close to the books you want to stay, Legalos I think make a great balance for Buffy, however if you want to deviate from the book Buffy and Aragorn is also a nice way to go because they can relate to one another in ways that others can't with that whole destiny and responsibility thing. Oh and updates are of the good!
Review By [BkwrmDancer] • Date [10 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Interesting idea. Buffy isn't specifically targeted to be brought to ME, at least by it's denizens. You need to work on spelling, though. It's 'perform', not preform. Also 'vaguely' not what you had. I'd like to see more.
Review By [musicgirl] • Date [10 Jun 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Love the story so far. The way Buffy was brought into LOTR very interesting. Only problem I have is the numerous misspelled words. I would ike to help with that, and sent you an email about it. Hope to see more soon!
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Review By [dharkcharlotte] • Date [10 Jun 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]