OMG OMG I LOVED IT, I LOVED EVERYTHING, ONE OF THE BEST STAR WARS STORIES EVER. ONE OF THE BEST CROSSOVERS EVER.

i especially loved the Ben and Buffy interaction scenes. they were so sweet and snarky, just perfect.

THANKS SO MUCH FOR SUCH AN AMAZING STORY.

This is a very good story, even though there are still spelling errors sporadically scattered about. I look forward to the tale continuing.

Fantastic story! Loved it! For soooo many reasons!

Thanks for sharing!

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This is an amazing story. I really do like the way you handled the crossover aspect and it's a really great premise to run with. I can't wait for the next installments of the sequel!!

I greatly liked reading the story. Though I wish Anakin and Obiwan had gone through the portal with Buffy, instead of Qui Gon. Therefore, I so would like to somehow see that happen, even now.

really fantastic plotting, and great characterization. you nailed buffy's tone in particular. enjoyable read all-around!

must admit to great disappointment at the ending! (incurable romantic). please do develop the alternate ending if you have the time and inclination... i really am rooting for "ben" and buffy. i love their dynamic.

Loved it!! The best part was the fact that you had all the characters in character! Thats a foreign concept to many writers these days. Thank you for writing this and I really hope you continue to write more stories in the future! And please continue with a sequel!

Great work! I've only seen the first Star Wars movie so it was a bit difficult for me to keep up on all of the names, but I followed along okay. I kept hoping for more than a kiss with all of the UST between Buffy and Ben but I guess that's the next story, huh? As for Anakin, Is it wrong of me to hope that since Buffy was his "sister" he would become Darth? Of course, now that she's missing and he's after the power to help find her, I guess it's one of those forgone conclusions. Great work again!

Awesome awesome story!! Speechless really. :)

Fantastic story so far, just one thing I'd like to point out *shifts into uber geek mode* Before Ani enters and wins the Boonta Eve Classic in The Phantom Menace, one of his friends mentions that he has never finished a race, let alone won. So he couldn't have won the Nubian parts. Just thought you might wanna change that.

I enjoyed this fic - it was well structured, good pacing and the characterisations for the most part were excellent.

The major niggles for me were the typos - some of the spelling and grammar was incorrect and occasionally you used the wrong word ie pacifically instead of specifically. Spelling mistakes or grammatical errors can halt the flow of story and are something that a beta reader should pick up.

I hope you don't think I'm being pernickety because on the whole I thought the story was excellent and well thought out.

Ah great story, you are a very good writer and I look forward to reading more of your work

Destiny.
I love the way you've brought this one to a close. It's so very in character for everyone.

very good

WAHHH!! How could you end it like that? I mean, I'll admit it's a great ending, so sad and so many questions left unanswered. Will Buffy ever return? Will Benny and Buffy get to finally have the 'talk'? And... the sadest part is that you haven't continued... I know it's almost been a year, but I'm still dying to see what happens next... and only you have the answers!! (Wow, that didn't sound as corny in my head.).......


Ok, I'm done being emotional now. Now, to compliment you endlessly, in hopes of having a sequel posted sometimes soon. This fanfic is amazing, the way you included vampires into the story was... well I would've never thought of something like that. Anakin and Buffy's brother-sister relationship is also the cutest thing I've ever seen, because it seems so realistic. I mean, you could've made them the type of people that get along 24/7 but they squabble like regular siblings and it's a great read. I also love the Dawn-esque temper tantrum that Anakin threw. I also love that fact that you didn't get Buffy any 'Force powers'. because Buffy has enough power as it is, and she's so awesome that she doesn't need the Force to kick ass, which rocks... besides, Buffy's violent... forcefields and magical powery stuff seems more like Willow's type of thing...

Oh, well, thank you for such a nice review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

Yeah, I know it's been - what? eight months since the last chapter? Gee, I didn't realize it's been that long. But, I am completely planning on having more out to you guys soon. I know I keep saying that, but I swear this time. I hope you enjoy the next part and it'll answer those questions you have. And thank you again for the kind words. :)