Review of chapter "It's all Sumerian to me" from purrfus
Sad, and sweet, and Andrew all in one little fic. So good it is scary.
Review By [purrfus
] • Date [8 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's all Sumerian to me" from BlameyFomorrii
"Nathaniel flipped through the pages of his magazine, not really reading. He was too excited to concentrate. Anita was taking him out on a date that night. A real date, in a real restaurant. Like real people did. It was going to be just the two of them, for once. And it had been all Anita's idea."
--Okay, that is just sad and heartbreaking!! Nathaniel is so excited, and desperate, it just makes my heart ache.
And-sad that he has some sort of eating/diet disorder ("Have to spend the whole day in the gym after the meal"-or, is it because he's a stripper, and women just want to see a taut body-not a nice meal, flab body?)
"The blond man gave Dawn a smile. Nathaniel really hoped the guy wasn't a boyfriend or anything, although if Dawn's reaction was anything to go by, he wasn't. Gregory wouldn't be happy. Nathaniel's pard-mate had been asking around after Dawn so much that Anita had finally snapped and told him to just talk to the girl. Not that he had."
--I love Nathaniel, and Gregory. They are both just so adorable! (And Andrew is so not)
""Good." Anita sighed and rested her head against Nathaniel's shoulder. "Gregory would be having kittens if Dawn already had a boyfriend.""
--I want a kitten...especially one of Gregory's kittens. Or!! A Nathaniel kitten-fun and sweet~
have to go-fin later
"He'd heard Jason use the word 'unattainable' the other day, and he hoped he was using it the right way. From Anita's lack of reaction, he figured that he had."
--That is sad! He's so self conscience about his intelligence, and wanting to do everything right around Anita. I love Nathaniel.
I want to cry on behalf of Nathaniel.
Thank you for the review response. It means so much to me-I love it when Authors respond to my reviews.
Anyway-I loved this story! More-please.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii
] • Date [30 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's all Sumerian to me" from Ansku
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [17 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's all Sumerian to me" from Deanie
Aw... this is so sweet. I love the Anita/Nathaniel part at the end... oh, and for the pool? I'd like to bet that Dawn gets fed up with waiting and asks Gregory out :)
Review By [Deanie
] • Date [5 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's all Sumerian to me" from PippaTheMouse
Absolutely lovely. Thank you. :-)
Review By [PippaTheMouse
] • Date [13 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's all Sumerian to me" from Mari
Poor, poor, Nathaniel. No one really deserves Andrew. The random sci-fi references were great, although you did lose me with the "Batman and Robin" reference. I have no idea what was going through his head.
Nice little ficlet. The continuity details were well-placed, and the bit about the dating pool was fun.
Review By [Mari
] • Date [13 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's all Sumerian to me" from Lilly
aww.... :) that was very sweet, and I loved how you managed to focus attention on Nathaniel and Anita's date, even whike keeping Dawn in focus. *weg* well done.
Review By [Lilly
] • Date [13 Jun 05] • Not Rated