In many fics the new council has pull with FBI or some part of the government, also can Willow teleport in grab everyone and get them out? Once Lucy is with the slayer she should calm down and the cops can't arrest you for teleporting yet. Or do you want to bring a small army of slayers in to just knock the stupid cops flat? That could be fun. Just please update.
Review By [Rune] • Date [20 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I see that it's been several years since you've updated any stories. I hope you haven't given up completly. You have such a good foundation set up, I would love to see the completed story.
Review By [caissana] • Date [4 May 09] • Not Rated
::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot cake::
#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=# "Are You Pondering What I'm Pondering?" "I think so, Brain, but isn't a cucumber that small called a gherkin?" - Pinky and the Brain #=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Not Rated
This was fascinating. It's a completely new view of a Potential being Called. Poor kid - a panic attack hits on the same day she went Active. Luckily, she's a nice child, with a strong and supportive family. I like this story.
I love your characterizations. You've given the characters a humanity that didn't exist in their portrayals on TV. Consequences that last beyond the next episode, and pain that haunts for the rest of life are the reality that television writers normally overlook. Thank you.
Review By [renatria] • Date [2 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Hecatonchires
Review:
_Really_ enjoying this one
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [11 Dec 05] • Not Rated