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Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from storylistener
Review:
This is a wonderful if confusing beginning. Now where's the rest of the story? This can't be it, nothing makes sense or gives any answers. Basically, well written, good attention grabber, but this SO shouldn't be a stand-alone oneshot, it's just too good.
Review By [storylistener] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from ashez
Review:
It's too bad you never continued this. The premise is really interesting. Giles seeing Xander as a son rather rings false, but its well written other than that small point.
Review By [ashez] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from LucyH
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Now, I may be wrong but my interpretation of what was going on is that Xander isn't Toby but rather Toby is Xander's father with the comment on Jessica having Xander by someone other than Tony. That when Xander was deeply in despair and wishing for something to be different that allowed Jareth to come into the world and collect him because of his connection to Toby.

Still just wanted to say I found the premise very interesting and would love if you ever decided to write a sequel to tell us how Xander is doing with the Goblin King and such!
Review By [LucyH] • Date [4 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from twlight
Review:
Having this end like this is just cruel to the reader as we have no real closure. I do however love the story
Review By [twlight] • Date [6 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from kayron
Review:
This was kind of interesting. Can't say I understood it though.
Review By [kayron] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from Vassago
Review:
As many others have said before...this SUCKS as a oneshot. It is Awesome as a beginning, though, but seeing as how you don't seem to going to continue this I'm leaving my rating as a 4/10.

Too many questions unanswered, too many loose threads, things like that. This isn't complete, no matter how much you say it is. It's more abandoned/dropped than it is complete.
Review By [Vassago] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
OMG! That was so COOL!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from ForeverWaiting
Review:
.... trippy...
will there be a continuation??? please?

xXBellaXx
Review By [ForeverWaiting] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from RosytheCat
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Any chance for a continuation of this? It's made of awesome.

-- Rosy the Cat
Review By [RosytheCat] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from (Past Donor)trenee
Review:
bump squiggle bump squish.. nub ..
mmm
Aewnaur!
Review By [(Past Donor)trenee] • Date [20 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from InsaneGiggles
Review:
Wow this is so awesome.Keep up the great work.
Review By [InsaneGiggles] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from FlitShadowflame
Review:
:(

This is most emphatically NOT finished. What happens to Xander now? What does Jared do? *whimperwhimper* more please?
Review By [FlitShadowflame] • Date [20 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from PrincessTai
Review:
Whoa-ho-ho-hooooo!
Nooo
You can't end that like that.
Yes as a fellow writer I know demands such as that suck.
But you can't end it like that.
No WAAAAAY. You just ... wow.
LOL That in no way explains half of the questions I have.

So Jessica is Sarah, I'm guessin'
What does Toby have to do with this aside for the obvious ... for a second I thought Giles as Toby.
Why did Jareth wait all these years for his kid?
You have to explain at least half of those. Please.
It's a good story. REAL good potential.
So please, pretty please continue it.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from slashfreak
Review:
Please update i really like this story so far. But i need more
Review By [slashfreak] • Date [28 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "As the World Falls Down" from Christy
Review:
okay whoa...on one level, what a wonderful story idea but it seems terribly OOC on so many levels for so many characters...it's too haphazard to be a truly good story.
Review By [Christy] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [3 out of 10]
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