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Review of chapter "The First Step" from anouk
Review:
Wow, I feel bad for Faith. But good for her for not staying.
So short (but very well written of course) :(... I kind of hoped you might have written more in this 'verse' but alas no sequels or anything... I guess it works well as a one shot, but the situation is rather intriguing- how Faith deels and how Bobby reacts and goes through his own realization perhaps.
Comments from author:
I was thinking about what price Faith might be willing to pay to find a group she fits in with...which lead to wondering how much it would take for her to walk away from that. Glad you enjoyed! ~Ves
Review By [anouk] • Date [5 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Step" from wickedness
Review:
i don't know if i reviewed yet, but let me tell you, i LOVED this fic. faith switches roles - she's the one heartbroken in this fic and i love it because she just looks so ... human ... sometimes everyone forgets that she is.
Comments from author:
You did but the second review made me squee with joy just as much as the first. And yeah - it is so easy to look at early seasons Faith and forget that she is quite a young woman with feelings and all. I love seeing what situations would make Faith vulunerable or afraid or self-sacrificing because it's not what we've usually seen from her - but I do think she can! Thanks again! ~Ves
Review By [wickedness] • Date [3 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Step" from wickedness
Review:
this was REALLy good. usually it's faith that isn't the one in love and being used. it's nice to see her on the other end. the picture you paint is endearing/
Comments from author:
I've always had the feeling she'd fall hard when it happened. In this case, perhaps it is more her realization that she is being used. I think Faith is used to having things on her terms...and this loss of control would be quite a blow to her. Thanks so much for taking the time to review! ~Ves
Review By [wickedness] • Date [29 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Step" from Lucinda
Review:
ouch, now I feel bad for Faith. But it was very well written.

I always feel a little jealous of people who can tell such a complete story in so few words.

Lucinda
Comments from author:
*laughs* Well, I always feel jealous of people who have more than 500-2500 words of a story in their heads. My Muse is really into brevity. One of these days I am going to produce something with at least a few chapters.

Anyway - THANK YOU for your kind words. I know how into X-men you are and it means a lot to me that this met with your approval. I can see Bobby being attracted to the cachet of being with Faith. And good for her for walking away from that sort of relationship. I think a younger her would not have been so bold. ~Ves
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [21 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Step" from banner
Review:
Poor Faith. Still doing the denial/run away thing. Not even trying to turn attraction into love.

She's without any hope.
Comments from author:
I don't know about that. In this case, she really is leaving a situation where she is being used. Or perhaps it is all her perception. I certainly intended her take on the situation to be accurate but there really is room for interpretation. Thanks for the thought-provoking review! ~Ves
Review By [banner] • Date [20 Jun 05] • Not Rated
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