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20 Minutes with Riley

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Review of chapter "20 Minutes with Riley" from (Past Donor)Joyful
Review:
This story is brilliant. I would so love to see more than just 20 minutes.
Review By [(Past Donor)Joyful] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20 Minutes with Riley" from (Recent Donor)LordMesron
Review:
I love it! The bet was hilarious, and so were the three of them basically showing up SG1 at the end.
Review By [(Recent Donor)LordMesron] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20 Minutes with Riley" from LadyNandae
Review:
I always liked Riley and am happy to see a positive story for him. I got a kick out of this though, my brothers and I once came up with a list of things we would do if fighting the goa'uld and you named a couple of the same things. I suggested a short sword or long knife(think legolas's long knives on LotR), and we had wondered if there was a way to make an inoculation or vaccine long before the Stargate episode that had one was aired. I wouldn't want to be possessed even by the Tok'ra even if they would be willing, talk about a security breach cause I was understanding such that the goa'uld could read the memories of their hosts. Overall a wonderful short story, I would love to see a longer version in the future.
Oh, do think any of the initiative solders that survived would do wonderfully in Stargate Command. I also believe the initative was backed by the N.I.D.

lol glad to see the good work.
Review By [LadyNandae] • Date [15 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20 Minutes with Riley" from TarnishedGold
Review:
::chuckles softly:: I love the bet, not sure you catured Riley to a T seemed a bit too scoobyish to me, but I liked it anyways. Keep up the good work.
Gold
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [27 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20 Minutes with Riley" from morange
Review:
cool!
Review By [morange] • Date [20 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20 Minutes with Riley" from (Past Donor)Deanie
Review:
Hee... I love the part where they're betting what's under Teal'c's hat. Great job.
Review By [(Past Donor)Deanie] • Date [18 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20 Minutes with Riley" from manic
Review:
Wow, that was great! Very clever and well written. Great concept, too. I loved the betting pool, and that the unclaimed pot goes to charity :) I wonder if this could evolve into a series. Thanks for sharing
Review By [manic] • Date [27 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20 Minutes with Riley" from Lucinda
Review:
snicker.... this was nice, thanks for sharing.

I wonder how much things will/would change if some of those suggestions were implimented?
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [27 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20 Minutes with Riley" from YademosEbyam
Review:
Very good, and a bit more believable than most other similar crossovers. Just one thing; where did you get "once a host, never again"? Jack was a host twice; once to Hathor's get in a season two(?) clip episode, and once in season six to the Tok'ra who left him to Baal's not-so-tender mercies.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. I misremembered the hosts situation - it was that Jaffa unable to be hosts after their symbiotes mature.
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [27 Jun 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20 Minutes with Riley" from banner
Review:
That was fun, although I do have a nit-pick - the Tok'Ra Jolinar said that it is risky for the symbiote to take multiple hosts in a short time.
Comments from author:
I think I misremembered something about Jaffa unable to be hosts after their symbiotes matured. Oops!

Thanks for reviewing and for gently pointing out my mistake.
Review By [banner] • Date [27 Jun 05] • Not Rated
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