I would Love to give this a 10 for the idea alone, but it's a shame it turned out so rushed. Parts of it read like stereo instruction, lacking any real descriptive writing or emotion. Other parts were wonderfully done! If you ever have the time, I would love to help you flesh this out.
Review By [gothfeary] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
So this is the source for Xander Elric from Magia, huh. I liked it, though the ending was a bit bittersweet. Of course, bittersweet endings are good sometimes and this is definitely one of those times.
Review By [DarkGoddess] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
That was really good. I can tell that you enjoy writing Halloween stories. I especially liked the part where Spike got dusted. He was a good villain, but the character really went downhill once he got the chip.
Review By [AkatsukiDaybreak] • Date [29 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Now THIS is the way a FMA crossover should be done! With Xander having Edward's memories, he made a FANTASTIC FMA! And his sacrifice at the end was one fitting of a hero. A story worthy of more than a 10, but alas, the rankings only go up to a 10.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Inspiration just hit me!
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Pretty decent. It's a shame it's so rushed, some of the stuff you glossed over would be interesting to see un more detail. Didn't quite get the ending but you win serious brownie points for the alchemal explaination of vamps, it actually made perfect sense. Oh and Ed's reaction to suddenly being 6ft was amusing.
