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Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from Chikageko
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YEP! We noticed the lack of beta... Big spike to ram through your premise here, Janna Kalderash and later Willow Rosenberg, season 8's General Voll and dozens of other tertiary characters throughout the entire series mix magic and technology regularly. There is also quite a big of magic within canon that relies on the power of the caster or sacrifices souls. Even you your VERY limited breakdown of magic early in the story you hit upon what an alchemist would have used to perform their art without any of the ridiculous shenanigans you wrote. Personal power. The power created by the caster themselves instead of being channeled from others. And what's with all the bombs? Meh, not bad for a rush job, but boy was it ever!
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [20 Jul 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from Fayari
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Pretty good. You got Angel's reaction down pat. Stupid selfish coward who can only hide behind his vampiric strength. What a wuss.

Xander should not have sacrificed part of himself for Angel, but then again, Xander's cool like that.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from gothfeary
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I would Love to give this a 10 for the idea alone, but it's a shame it turned out so rushed. Parts of it read like stereo instruction, lacking any real descriptive writing or emotion. Other parts were wonderfully done! If you ever have the time, I would love to help you flesh this out.
Review By [gothfeary] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from CelebwenTelcontar
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That was an excellent story! I really liked the ending.
Review By [CelebwenTelcontar] • Date [16 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from Hanzo
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♥. brilliant♥.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from Bobboky
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excellent
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from Nomma
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Outstanding, man.
Review By [Nomma] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from Obsidian
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Only watched a little bit of the alchemist show but from what I read here, good story, thanks.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from DarkGoddess
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So this is the source for Xander Elric from Magia, huh. I liked it, though the ending was a bit bittersweet. Of course, bittersweet endings are good sometimes and this is definitely one of those times.
Review By [DarkGoddess] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from AkatsukiDaybreak
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That was really good. I can tell that you enjoy writing Halloween stories. I especially liked the part where Spike got dusted. He was a good villain, but the character really went downhill once he got the chip.
Review By [AkatsukiDaybreak] • Date [29 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from Dragonelf
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A really good story and I really, really hope you one day will be inspired to write a sequel to this story.

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [28 Jan 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from Harry
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Now THIS is the way a FMA crossover should be done! With Xander having Edward's memories, he made a FANTASTIC FMA! And his sacrifice at the end was one fitting of a hero. A story worthy of more than a 10, but alas, the rankings only go up to a 10.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Inspiration just hit me!
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from Elleria
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This is really good, love it.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [22 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from Bobboky
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way cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fullmetal X" from Weaver
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Pretty decent. It's a shame it's so rushed, some of the stuff you glossed over would be interesting to see un more detail. Didn't quite get the ending but you win serious brownie points for the alchemal explaination of vamps, it actually made perfect sense. Oh and Ed's reaction to suddenly being 6ft was amusing.
Review By [Weaver] • Date [5 Dec 05] • Not Rated
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