Review of chapter "Letters from the road" from Sky
Review:
Good story but it needs a little work, such double checking for any spelling mistakes. Hope you continue writing this!!
Review By [Sky] • Date [29 Jan 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When Xander Joined the pack" from CPTSkip
Review:
Whoa! Nice start. I am not familiar with the Pack stories, but you have certainly caught my attention. Will there be more to this story?
Comments from author:
Nope sorry, I dont even know were to go from this one. The Pack would help out with the Hellmouth, but not much they could do against them. They dont have any magic just force, and like to use it too much. If they even thought that someone was working on the black hat side they just kill them, doent matter one way or the other. Would just be easier to Kill the town than patrol it. ( Kind of like the demon Gang that Buffy fought when she came back from Heaven),
Review of chapter "When Xander Joined the pack" from selkie
Review:
I like the idea for the story, and you're doing well with it so far. Tone and characterizations seem correct, and you've resisted the temptation to infodump a bunch of stuff about a possibly unfamiliar universe too early on. (IMO, when people try to do that too much, it kills the pacing of the story)
I'm looking forward to seeing where you're taking it, and wondering just how much, if anything, Xander might have picked up from Spike from the cat.
Comments from author:
Sorry, this was just a one shot deal, I could think of were to go with some other Projects I have going with this one in my head.
Review By [selkie] • Date [4 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
