This is a very interesting story...I'd like it if you would write a sequel or an extended version of this story. One thing though...Digory was never a King in Narnia, he was there at the founding but the Cab driver and his wife were made King and Queen.
Comments from author:
*Sigh* I know Digory was never a king, but he was the old professor that had a quote or piece of advice for any situation revolving around the magical world of Narnia.
I’m glad you enjoyed it and I hope it spawns some ideas.
-Tjin
Review By [Elleria] • Date [4 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Nice. Some jarring spelling/grammar issues (you wrote "there" instead of "their", as well as a couple of other things), but not bad overall. I'd suggest getting someone to read over your stuff in the future, just to catch things the spellchecker doesn't.