Review of chapter "Accidental Utterances" from
ObsidianReview:
hmm I didn't get who said something they shouldn't have. And because of that the story made no sense. Needs a reworking with that more obvious.
Review By [
Obsidian] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Accidental Utterances" from
azulkanReview:
Cute, I liked it.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [
azulkan] • Date [7 Jul 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]