Review of chapter "Accidental Utterances" from Obsidian
hmm I didn't get who said something they shouldn't have. And because of that the story made no sense. Needs a reworking with that more obvious.
Review By [Obsidian
] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Accidental Utterances" from azulkan
Cute, I liked it.
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Review By [azulkan
] • Date [7 Jul 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]