Review of chapter "Two by Moonlight" from BuffyKaibaHunt
Very awesome! :) I like it. Very creative, as well as very well-written, too. I especially like how Richard listened to Anne's story, and also explained to her what the Church of Eternal Life was, too. And, being a werewolf kind of like Oz, he knew what vampires were himself, so he knew what Anne meant.
And I like the line "the evil, demonic, Hellmouth kind, not the respectable, running-businesses-in-St.-Louis kind", because it implied to me that Anne remembered her days as Chantarelle, as well as how she thought that vampires were sweet, loving and lonely and didn't realize what they really were until she met Buffy and saw what the vampires in Sunnydale were really like. Plus, Anne had long since heard that no two vampires were alike, just as no two snowflakes were alike, so she knew that not all vampires were like the ones in Sunnydale, either; most of them, like the ones in St. Louis, did run businesses and were respectable.
Anyway, keep up your super-neat, very cool and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt
] • Date [20 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two by Moonlight" from Keshkreature
Aww, this is very sweet. I loved the interaction between the two of them, and I think they make a great couple.
Review By [Keshkreature
] • Date [12 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two by Moonlight" from Kneazles
This was interesting. I can see Anne and Richard quite easily. Good job.
Review By [Kneazles
] • Date [2 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]