Review of chapter "The Leaky Cauldron" from
AriaDragoncrestReview:
Good start, rather short though. Please write longer chapters.
Review By [
AriaDragoncrest] • Date [24 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Leaky Cauldron" from
AriaDragoncrestReview:
Good start, rather short though. Please write longer chapters.
Review By [
AriaDragoncrest] • Date [24 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Reply" from
SaphrineReview:
I am glad to see htat this was not abandoned and forgotten, I am really looking foward to seeing whre you go with this.
Comments from author:
I just had to work my self out of the corner that the story had gotten me in. I had to down the whole story at one time to chapter nine but I am rewriting it. I have to rewrite because I wanted one pairing but I will not say which.
Review By [
Saphrine] • Date [23 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Reply" from
LinReview:
You still have a lot of spelling mistakes that destract from your story. I hope you fix them, i'm interested in what direction or what new twist you will put on this type story.
Review By [
Lin] • Date [22 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wand less Witch and the Boy Who Lived" from
LadyCarpathianReview:
Take it by the comment at the end, that all chapters of this story have been pulled to be re-edited??? I really hope to see more soon.
Review By [
LadyCarpathian] • Date [20 Jul 05] • Not Rated
