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Review of chapter "Potential Weapon" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
good read and great ending to the chapter. thank you for the read.
Comments from author:
You're quite welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
"he’d seen that look from two women himself, and he’d married both of them."

Three women, and he'd married two of them. You're forgetting Rika; she looked at him like that too, before Vorstedt dumped her at the bottom of the harbour.
Comments from author:
Good point. Will have to look into changing that.
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [4 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon" from spring
Review:
Oh dear this so doesn't look good. Now on to the sequel
Comments from author:
As it happens, I'm working on the next chapter and it should be available in the very near future.
Review By [spring] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting....going to read the next bit now.
Comments from author:
Thanks. glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon" from MrsAndisMom
Review:
I Just saw this...PLEASE follow it up...that could be all kinds of fun....
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback. Potential Weapon 2 has already been posted, and there will be additional follow-ups in the future.
Review By [MrsAndisMom] • Date [20 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon" from BarrettJD
Review:
Please continue the plot bunny. You can introduce a "Letal Weapon" like Martin Riggs into season 7 at that point without at least having him findout about the "night (un)life". Great start to what I hope expands to a full story. Plus, Roger and Riggs still haven't said yet, "...I'm getting too old for this shit!"
Comments from author:
Don't worry, Riggs isn't going to be leaving without a full explanation. And why do you htink that Riggs doesn't already know about the night (un)life? Angel's been in L.A. for three years now, and Riggs and Murtaugh have always been involved when wierd stuff goes down. ;-)

Also, when you consider the damage that ensued in the first movie after the regular (human) bad guys tried to hurt Roger's eldest daughter, do you really think that he's gonna let the Bringers walk away without exacting any payback for trying to kill her?

Don't worry, that particular quote will be echoing through town before things conclude. ;-)
Review By [BarrettJD] • Date [9 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon" from azulkan
Review:
Now that was totally unexpected. I liked it.
Comments from author:
That's exactly what I was aiming for. Thanks.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [9 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to more of your work.
Comments from author:
Thank you. This won't be a long story in any event, because Sunnydale isn't a very big town. Just consider the amount and extent of the devestation that ensues in Riggs and Murtaugh's wake normally, and then figure out what'll happen when they add Sunnydale to the mix. They're gonna run out of town real quick. ;-)
Review By [war] • Date [9 Jul 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon" from Kirallie
Review:
Interesting! What exactly is the crossover? The names are vaguely familiar.
Comments from author:
The crossover is with the Lethal Weapon series of movies. Carrie was the younger daughter of Rger and Trish Murtaugh and the semi-niece of Martin Riggs.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [9 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon" from BARON
Review:
Great start to this story i can not wait to read the next chapter please post it as soon as you are able .

ED
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback. I'll get to this as soon as I can. I'm working on the next chapter of Coyote Alpha right now.
Review By [BARON] • Date [8 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential Weapon" from VillageOrchid
Review:
That was a good one. And pre-eye loss for Xander? Please continue -- as Xander has to explain how Rona went from being kidnapped by a drug gang to being in a visiting girls martial arts team.

Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Somehow, I don't think that Riggs is going to readily buy any explanation the Scoobies try to come up with regarding drug gangs or martial arts teams. ;-)

Try to envision the aftermath when the team of Riggs and Murtaugh, who are already famous throughout L.A. for their 'urban renewal' tendencies, joins the Scooby Gang. ;-) Another thing to keep in mind is that Riggs is a former Marine. There is no such thing as 'too big an explosion.' ;-)

And I'm already looking forward to Riggs' first meeting with Spike. ;-)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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