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Review of chapter "Want to be a Cowboy" from mojtaba
Review:
wow this story really needs 2 betas and a dozen rewrites....it is just a mess.... the idea is ok but the story flow is very bad.....
Review By [mojtaba] • Date [19 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "15" from MistieMossflower
Review:
Great story, I hope that you will update really, really soon, because I want to know what happens to everyone when the reach Hera and I want to know what that golden teardrop thingie is.
Review By [MistieMossflower] • Date [14 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "in the black" from Obsidian
Review:
ok i'm not sure where you are going with this fic but you totally confused me by changing settings like that with no warning. and a confusing story is not a good story in my book. this is making no sense. You where doing good until you went with this in the dark stuff... it's like a totally diffrent story jumped in in the middle. really confusing.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I know. and am sorry for the jump. I was writing this story on another sight, and hit a roadblock with it. I tried to push through and ended up with this. It was only going to be a one shot story and everyone pushed me into writing more. I had just started to write at the time and didn't really have a plot at all. just an basic out line, and soon just got away. that is why I really cant get a handle on this to complete it. I know how it ends but getting it there is the problem.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from Blend
Review:
Holy crap!

I have fallen in love with this fic. The way you weave the words keeps my eyeballs glued to the screen. Woohoo!
Review By [Blend] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "15" from lorwen
Review:
Story is awesome.
Need more story.
Comments from author:
thanks. I don't have to time to work on more than one story at the time right now. But I do plan on finishing this one. the problem I had with this one was it was meant to a one shot and it just kept growing so I know were i want it to go but not how to get there. SO its an up hill fight with this one.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from Duskie
Review:
I love this story. Was kind of sad you seemed to just end one story part way through it and take a five hundred year brake it felt like an incomplete story.
I hope you continue this is fabulous. Did Xander know John Crichton at some point. That wasn't moiya was it?!?
Giant gold tear, ???, cliffy much?

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Hehehe, I'm a dope. I was asking that the destroyed ship wasn't Moiya but I subtract that question in light of thinking more about giant golden non-metallic ships.
Comments from author:
I do like this story. I love writing on it. But it has been my bane. It was meant as a one shot about Xan getting a dark quickening. but it grew and grew. I had no plan no plot nothing just taking feedback and working them into the story. so I had no ideal were to go from part to part. Just a basic ideal of how I want it to go. It had only a few parts to go, but with the way my life is now I dont have to time to write, just a few sentances now and then. While I am at work. so Nothing it writen out. it goes the same with all my stories.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [6 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from lorwen
Review:
I like it. Keep up the good work.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [31 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from Alltorian
Review:
Great, here comes Moya. Do I sense more love trouble for Xan? Maybe a catfight in the next chapter?
Comments from author:
Nope no love trouble. and no cat fight. at least not one I can think of. Most of my writing in done on the fly, and with this story more than the others. This was a one shot that grew and grew. still not sure were its going.
Review By [Alltorian] • Date [23 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "15" from Elleria
Review:
Update SOON please.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [22 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from CPTSkip
Review:
Man, you have nearly made me cry with these last few updates. Poor Kaylee/Tara and poor stupid Mal. I hope he gets his head out of his duffle bag soon enought to help the Immortals save the Universe from Glory. I was just wondering, what would happen if Glory/Ben were dropped into a Black Hole or even just a nice normal little star? Just how tough is Glory/Ben? Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [21 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "15" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "14" from Elleria
Review:
More as soon as you can please!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [8 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "14" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "14" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Mal needs another ass-kicking. He's being a jerk.
Comments from author:
Well, Mal is a jerk. He just doesn't do surprise's.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [7 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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