This was fun; hope you'll continue it. I always grin at the 'small pebble, enormous avalanche' stories. Xander with the technical genius of Dr. Doom (hello? Time Raft ring a bell?) as well as the Sorcerer Supreme more than qualifies for the category, it practically defines it.

SD

Awesome story. At times I was laughing like crazy at some of the scenes. Please update soon.

Aww... Why'd you stop? if you even still remember...

Please update!!

Interesting idea, I always love a good Halloween costume fic and I love it more when the character in question is a Grey or neutral character instead of a lily white hero.

Second favorite part this fic had to be Angel though, I agree with what was said. He might eventually turned out be a decent person but most people seem put far to much faith in a Soul instantly meaning Angel was good. A lot of humans have souls and are pretty evil, Angel had a soul for 80 some years and did nothing with it. He didn't help anyone, he didn't kill himself he just coasted around until a Whistler told him stalk a 15 year old girl.

I just found this story. Very interesting ... but you haven't updated in some time. Any chance you will continue the story.

I hope you will get inspired to add more chapters to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some Carrot Cake::

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look good so far. So are Xander and Buffy going to be in the grey area?
up-date soon

Good story - I'd like to see it continued.

The Washu reference at the end was pretty funny :-)

good story so far, though ive never really been a fan of the fantastic four.

Great work Hope you contine it.

Great story,
keep up the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

I want more.

Interesting take on Doom. I am looking forward to the new dynamic between Buffy and Xander, also I'm wondering if you are going to let Jonathan keep anything from Reed Richards. Otherwise good show.

More soon please.