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Review of chapter "Hollow Places" from FireWolfe
Review:
As one of the mods for the site I was hoping you would come back to this fic and make it live again. Its one of my favorites and it kind of depressing that it is lying here dying. So pretty please with sugar on top breathe life back into it.
Comments from author:
What would my being a mod have to do with updating a story? I'm curious as to the thought behind that statement.

That being said if the story is dead I take it down. If I intend to finish it I keep it up. Until the day you can no longer find the story on this site you can assume I intend to finish it, but as for when I can't say for certain. It's been a long time since Stargate inspired me. Perhaps it's time for a rewatching of the series.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Today I’ll give up Living" from Glumski
Review:
Oh, come on! Another darn great story that lies around unifinished. Oh well...
First of all, the plot of this is great. The background is well thought of and the idea of an Ancient temple for the Slayer is a good (and I think unique) reason for a crossover. The characterizations seem to be very true; I especially liked Buffy, Faith and Dawn, though both Jack and Daniel (or any character, really) aren't bad in any way. The style of writing also is very nice, never boring and almost lyrical at times. I liked the dialogue a lot; the bantering was very entertaining. For some reason I also liked the relationship between Buffy and Daniel though I'm usually not exactly a fan of the romance parts...
The were quite a lot of errors unfortunately, mostly grammatical in origin. Nothing that'd be horrible but still noticable, things like your/you're or a missing verb here or there.

Well. I'm quite depressed that this is over now. I hope you'll continue this story at some (hopefully close) time. Since you're still active this might be actually possible in contrast to most of the incomplete stories on this site... umm, yeah. One might dream. So... thanks for posting this!
Comments from author:
Well I haven't taken it down yet so that's a good sign I intend to finish it eventually. Thank you in regards to the plot comment, but I can't take all the credit since this was originally a response to a challenge, but then it mutated and took on a life of it's own. When I started this story I was far more familiar with BtVS, but was gradually catching up on Stargate which might be why those characters fall flat, especially at the beginning of this story.

The errors are mine and mine alone, but I'm hoping to catch them all during the rewrite process and, alas, some of the Buffy and Daniel parts will be snipped. The pairing was also a stipulation of the challenge and sometimes their interactions feel force to me when I reread them, but I do appreciate your enjoyment of and I thank you for the lovely comment about the dialogue.

I'm hoping the rewrite is what inspires me to complete this story because I do have all my notes still so I know where and how it's supposed to end. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review!
Review By [Glumski] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Today I’ll give up Living" from FireWolfe
Review:
Love to see this work come alive again it has sadly seemed to die. Its worth a revival I think as its such a unique approach to the xover world.
Comments from author:
It's more on life support than actually dead. Not entirely certain when it'll come alive though. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Today I’ll give up Living" from Shadowman
Review:
An excellent story but a lousy place to stop. As I see you are still writing I hope we will see a continuation soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you and it is a lousy place to stop, but alas that is where the inspiration left me. I am still writing, but I can't promise anything in regards to soon. Thank you for reading.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [14 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Today I’ll give up Living" from CaitlinMuir
Review:
Oooh... I just found this... A great exciting read.

(What happens next?)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you found it and enjoyed it. Thank you for reading!

(Illyria saves the day and Buffy gets a hair cut?)
Review By [CaitlinMuir] • Date [15 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hollow Places" from Seraph
Review:
Hey! I just wanted to comment and let you know how much I have thoroughly enjoyed this story (and your other stories). I've read it so many times over the years so I hope maybe this can be a source of encouragement for you and the work you're doing for the rewrite. :)

Seraph
Comments from author:
Hello. Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed what's been posted so far and encouraging words are always welcome.
Review By [Seraph] • Date [6 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Today I’ll give up Living" from spk
Review:
Seriously begging for more of this. :)
Comments from author:
Unfortunately I can make no promises.
Review By [spk] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Today I’ll give up Living" from locard
Review:
Like your other stories, this is well thought and planned out. The characters are deep and true to the cannon. I hope you will finish this one.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I hope to finish it as well someday, but it will be going under a massive rewrite before new chapters are posted. Thank you for reading!
Review By [locard] • Date [5 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Today I’ll give up Living" from Obsidian
Review:
Great story. I know it's been a while since you updated but are you going to continue this story anytime soon? please?
Comments from author:
Thank you. I've no plans to continue it this story soon, but if it's still up on this site than I do plan to continue it eventually. Sorry to disappoint.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Today I’ll give up Living" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
thrilled to read in the reviews, that this tale is being revisited.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear and thank you!
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Today I’ll give up Living" from brokenmimir
Review:
Interesting fic, and I would love to see more. I'm a fan of Buffy/Illyria friendship fics, and I'd have to say that this is probably the best of that niche. I hope you write more on it someday.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I've started the process of rewriting so I think that will help stir inspiration for this story.

Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Today I’ll give up Living" from breve
Review:
Hoping against hope that this story hasn't been abandoned.
I loved Fred, but Illyria is something else entirely.
Please, can I have some more?
Comments from author:
Nope, not abandoned. I remove any story that I have no intention of completing. I adored Fred, but Illyria intrigues me to no end. I hope there's more soon-ish.
Review By [breve] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elder Seal" from breve
Review:
I'm pretty sure this story is years old.
I've only just discovered it and I'm really enjoying it.
I have actual, real tears while I read the ending of this chapter.
Thank you for writing this, love it.
Now back to read some more.
Comments from author:
It is, but I've slowly been in the process of rewriting so it's not abandoned. I'm glad you found it and like it!
Review By [breve] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Inner Grounds" from breve
Review:
"Gangs on PCP" love it!
Comments from author:
What's not to love about gangs on PCP... erm... quite a bit actually. :) Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [breve] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Today I’ll give up Living" from dinamo
Review:
I hope your muse returns to you with this fic its amazing so far. You write one of the best Illyria's I've ever seen and I love how well you capture her voice. I love her relationship with everyone especially Buffy. It seems totally right that she'd be with the slayers in some way after losing everyone else she knew.

I hope you are able to add to this in the future, its wonderfully well crafted and an excellent read, congrats so far and good luck with the rest
Comments from author:
Thank you. I hope it returns to it as well. :) I'm not sure about writing on of the best, I do use a lot of Illyria-isms, but thank you for the pretty compliment. I think Illyria wanted a connection to this world, fist Wesley and, in this story, then Buffy.

Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [dinamo] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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