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The Amahrryn Incident

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Review of chapter "The Amahrryn Incident" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting adaptation. Could have used a little more physical description of what people looked like or their body language.
Comments from author:
Oh, sorry. I didn't even think of that. I was trying for a fast-paced action/adventure style, and I was just operating on the assumption that readers would know what the Star Trek characters looked like and would be able to visualize the Buffy characters in their Romulan or Vulcan guises. Thanks so much for pointing that out.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Jul 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Amahrryn Incident" from Davelister
Review:
Very Nice!

rarely do I see any Star Trek Crossovers, and even more rare is a TOS cross, however one thing is wrong with the story, in TOS they didn't have Com badges they had communicators, the badge on the front of the tunics is just that, a badge
Comments from author:
Oh crap! It's been some time since I've seen TOS, and I was so busy researching Romulans, trying not to use information that wasn't available to Starfleet or the Federation in the original series, that I slipped up on Federation technology! I'd been used to seeing TNG use the comm badges and their non-use in TOS slipped right past me and BOTH my betas. My bad! The second you mentioned it though, I could immediately visualize Kirk flipping open his communicator and saying "Kirk here." Went back and changed the three references from "comm badges" to "communicators". Thanks so much for catching that!
Review By [Davelister] • Date [15 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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