would you please update this good story. pretty, pretty please.
My answer to Asher question would be, that is the reason that she feels save carrying holy water and a stake. Vampires are afraid of them and I would show him her cross always a bonus. Carrying them keeps the vampires away. You never can be save enough and she is not stupid. She probably carries a silver knife also well a knife hurts. There are always vampires who want a bite without your permission. Not a lie now is it. But that would be my answer. There isn't a law that forbid to carry those items.
What gives Asher the right to go trough her stuff. I would be so mad. He has no right to look without asking. So wrong.
Please update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
I like how Dave describes Buffy as "slightly insane" - he doesn't know the half of it! And there are so many ways Buffy could answer that question. She could keep trying to bluff or should could come clean and admit to being a vampire hunter. Either one would still be surprising to Asher :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I hope your Muse inspires you for this story at some point. You are one of my favorite authors who still writes and I'd love to see more of this and your other WIPs.
Katt
Review By [Katt] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
OMG Please please tell me this story is not abandoned its so good!!!! please please don't be a meanie update another chapter or ya know 10 i love it so much and your work is great, hehehe how's Buffy gonna get out of this one. I love this so much and i had half as much talent as you do i would write it but since i don't here is begging PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!
Hehehe like i said please update
Review By [CuzItsGotToBeBlood] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I've read this twice and it really is very good. I wish you would continue this, but it seems you have abandoned it. But anyways you're a really good writer.
Review By [wickedfire] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated