This was very good. I do hope you come back to it. As for an idea on where it can go. If Buffy cared bring her Spike back. It is a good pairing. Also have them trace Dawn to Slayer central and find her with Buffy again. I think it be interesting to see Buffy and the others help in the fight.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Well, you've got me hooked so far. I really can't wait to read more. What kind of help were you looking for as far as the stories go? You have your ideas and all, so how can I help you to get another chapter out? Let me know and keep up the good work :)
Review By [Fritolays] • Date [3 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Glad to see you haven't given up on this story--- so, Snape finally noticed the word "sister".... and he & DD seem strangely incurious about who their guide is... probably at this point figure she's a slayer, maybe newly activated as she's described happening? Will likely ask about this 'sister', B. will get all angry and defensive (not wanting strangers anywhere near Dawn)--- should get interesting... if the veritaserum hasn't worn off yet, she might say something without wanting to--maybe Willow then snatches her back to safety and they have to try & track her down? I'm kind of surprised the Aurors haven't gone to arrest Willow by now--all that magic use, almost destroying the world, etc...
Comments from author:
hmmm in some ways you know where my mind is going, close but not quite there... we'll see where i end up
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Is the hellmouth really closed?" from spring
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I love thsi fic! Please update this fic again soon!
Review By [spring] • Date [23 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Is the hellmouth really closed?" from AngellovesBuffy
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more soon please!
Review By [AngellovesBuffy] • Date [23 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Is the hellmouth really closed?" from purrfus
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Interesting idea and presentation. I do have a hard time with Snape saying 'Baby' in that particular context but I'm sure I'll get over it.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [7 Oct 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from AngellovesBuffy
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this fic has a lot of potental please continue soon!
Review By [AngellovesBuffy] • Date [7 Sep 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from spk
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OH COME ON!!! You can't leave it like that. What did she see? How does she tell Snape that she's his daughter? What's the prophecy? I LOVE how you're writing Buffy in this story and I especially love that you made Buffy Dumbledore's great-granddaughter. Please continue this story. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [13 Jun 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from Gylzgurl
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I just found your story and would love to read more. Unfortunately you haven't updated in a long time. I really hope you didn't forget about this. It would be a shame not to finish.
Review By [Gylzgurl] • Date [27 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from hangmansgirl
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i really like this...i truelly hope you finish it
>^.^<
Review By [hangmansgirl] • Date [26 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from abeliever
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Just read this, and I've gotta say, what's there?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Review By [abeliever] • Date [23 Dec 05] • Not Rated
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