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The Queen, The Knight, and The Slayer

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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DieselDriver
Review:
Heh, here's an error I used to make a lot... "allot" is not a word. Story still good. End of the chapter gives portents of trouble to come.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [16 Dec 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from DieselDriver
Review:
More awkward wording. If the story wasn't so cool I'd quit reading it because that just pains me. I used to be a tech writer and proof reader and it's hard to read poor wording without it distracting from the story. The story is good though so I'll continue. It's certainly worth fixing.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [16 Dec 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Queen, The Knight, and the Slayer" from DieselDriver
Review:
Whew, the wording is very awkward in a LOT of places. It's an interesting premiss though so I am going to read on.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [16 Dec 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Joseph
Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO You DID NOT stop writing there! Update Please!
Review By [Joseph] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Oxnate
Review:
Omg. You can not let this story die here. Also, they should really be speaking Greek.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Mordare
Review:
I just started reading your stories and I am loving the Xander Gabriella stories. Glad to see you are back writing again. Keep up the good work I am looking forward to more.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [16 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
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Great start to this story. I am curious why they are speaking latin? Wouldn't it make more sense for people from ancient Greece to speak ancient Greek? I'm not even sure they knew latin there and in that time.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [7 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DevJannz
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Welcome back. I really like how this story was coming together and I am happy that you will be adding to it again. I am looking forward to seeing how things go with Willow, the demons and how Xena and Gabrielle adjust to life in the 21st century.
Review By [DevJannz] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Jhawksun
Review:
i like it so please keep writing
Review By [Jhawksun] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Unseentraveler
Review:
great story so far. I hope you update again so
Review By [Unseentraveler] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
never read this one before. very good and welcome back to fanfic :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from kayron
Review:
Ares' plans are usually only to benefit Ares. So, why does he want Buffy back so bad? Why does he have to use Willow? He's a god. Why not bring her back himself? If he can inteact with the modern world, he probably knows that Hercules is around. Does he know about Xena and Gabrielle? It looks like there is a movement on the demon front to get back into power since the Slayer is gone. Does this mean that Ares has a plan to take power instead? I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out more. I'll be tracking.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, and I hope you enjoy the story as it develops.

Yes, Ares usually only has benefits for himself. But what you also got to remember, times have changed. Gods aren't as public and powerful as before. He has a reason for using Willow. It will be explained as the story goes on. And no, he doesn't know that Xena and Gabrielle are back. Xena doesn't want the gods to know of their return. Hercules being around is canon to the show. So, yes, Ares knows Hercules is there.

I can't answer the final question. Thanks again, Kayron.
Review By [kayron] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from maddog
Review:
Nice story glad to see it updated.
Review By [maddog] • Date [16 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Bluesnowman
Review:
good story so far.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [16 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DevJannz
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I really like what you have started with this story and I hope that you are able to get back to it sometime soon. I think that Xander, Buffy and Gabrielle are going to be an interesting mix.
Review By [DevJannz] • Date [18 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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