I'm always game for a good Buffy/Obi-Wan story, and I love what you've given us so far. Please, please, please update this story soon. I want to see how they manage to make it out of Buffy's mind.
Review By [kerrykhat] • Date [4 Nov 09] • Not Rated
I was very excited to see that you have rewritten this and even more so to hear that there is more on the way (I hope soon). I thoroughly enjoyed rereading - I'd forgotten how funny the Jar Jar/Buffy scene was.
Comments from author:
Thank you... I think that is probably one of my favorite scenes that I have ever written! :-) There's more coming; I have RL stuff going on, too, but it's coming!
All of your rewrites have made this an even better story. I like that when Obi-Wan entered her mind he recognized it, and she recognized him. I hope when they do make it out of there, they both remember each other. I can't wait to read more, I hope you update again soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad to see that all of mine and Charlotte's hard work have paid off! :-) I wanted to clear up some plot holes that I found as I re-read this before we headed off to the next part! I think you'll like what I have in store! :-D
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Okay I will now feed the muse. Here is a tasty cookie for all of your hard work. I need the next chapter to feel complete. My life must have meaning. Do not let it be in vain.
Review By [blueyes] • Date [9 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I love this fic. You claimed that you had the next three chapters written and that was over a year ago so I must ask what happened? This fic is wonderful so far please updated again, soon.
Comments from author:
It's getting there! LOL Charlotte and I had to re-do some chapters so that I could get where I needed it to go... and one of those re-works was to completely trash the other chapters I had done...
It'll all be worth it in the end, if you believe dharkcharlotte! LOL
Review By [spring] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Destiny's Gifts" from Chosenfire
Review:
Oh WOW!!!!
This story just blows me away, I am a big fan of this pairing and you are setting it up nicely and in a world that makes sense. I am not a big Satr Wars fan but I am a big fan of the Episode movies (if that makes sense) and you are doing a grat job so far.
One of my favorite things is Buffy's role as Padme's bodyguard, hopefully you stick close to the events in the movies and that can come into play heavily. I am really interested in seeing how her meeting with Anakin goes and hope you develop some sort of bond with the two chosen ones.
I do love this fic so far and I am eagerly awaiting more. Hopefully the muse bites on this one again.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [14 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
No, I assure you... it's not the end. :-) I'm in the process of cleaning up and reposting Darkness right now. As soon as I make some more progress on that and get some more progress done on my original piece, I'll be updating Destiny! :-) I have a lot of plans for it. And Dhark_Charlotte nags me nigh until Sunday to get all of it done! LOL I swear, I think a task master from the days of ole were more understanding. :-)
*whimpers* Figures that I'd go and get hooked on a story that seems to be abandoned. Crap. Oh well. Great story; Whistler was well-used and it works to bridge the BtVS/SW-verses. I like the dreams/bond thing too.
Comments from author:
I'm going to let you in on a secret...
It's not abandoned.
I've been working on how I want to get where I need to go from this point, since the story kinda developed a life of it's own here. LOL
I know it's been forever and a day since I updated this OR Darkness is a Friend of Mine, but it'll be done, I promise! :-) Just be patient with me!!